by baybabe36
Very hot. Loving the relentless attack on Karen.
Could maybe have used a little proof reading to fix minor mistakes but that's a minor quibble.
Glad you're fleshing out the characters a little more. Don't be afraid to make the chapters longer.
Looking forward to more. Please continue.
What on earth do you mean?
Since you can only throw up THROUGH your mouth the comment is very peculiar!
Also "His your shaft was rock hard and he ..."?
Get yourself an Editor who can teach you how to write and how to proof-read!
Really pleased that you're building the characters more.
Keep it going!!
I can see many more chapters to this story. Please don't keep us in suspense.
Just found this story. Keep it coming. Many ways it can go. Will be looking for more.
The story has potential. Good luck and use your imagination. Thanks
I just found this story...guess you are done, but sure would appreciate the continued saga...Keep the good work!
@ the Anonymous complaining about "proof-read"ing... quit your fucking whining, "proofread" is one word, and "editor" is not capitalized. If you're going to complain about a couple of minor typos, at least try not to sound like a fucking idiot when you do.
@baybabe36: love the story.
Love the story. I hope you decide to finish it. I would love to know what else happens to this sexy MILF.
I read these two stories awhile back. Hoping you added a few more chapters.
Could be a great series....I dont know why the ratings are not higher.
That was really fucking hot. The best rape-fetish stories are dom women getting torn down to a position of sub. Also, it turned from really hot to really funny to me in the very last 3 paragraphs when Karen was more disgusted by her attacker than spiteful.
Loved both parts.
This one even more so because of the “mom” aspect.Thank you and also adding you to my favorites..