Well written. I see Him for the Dominant He is.... though from your writing He is beyond the level of a loving Dominant. she is His property and He will use her as He likes, but no mention was made clear that she is into this. I guess that was done on purpose so you have made your point as a story teller.
4 stars.
English
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Well written. I see Him for the Dominant He is.... though from your writing He is beyond the level of a loving Dominant. she is His property and He will use her as He likes, but no mention was made clear that she is into this. I guess that was done on purpose so you have made your point as a story teller.
4 stars.
amazing
God, that was awesome....
Hot hot hot
That was damn good
What a turn on
By far one of the best stories I've read in a long time.
The Craving to be used
I really really liked this story. It struck some deep chords in me.
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