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Trembling breasts softened at his touch

Beneath a blue sky without gain...*When I read

these tow lines they didn't seem to fit together,

like the flow of the words didn't match the visual

you were trying to portray.*

Mumbling cheap words of passion and such...

His soul rubbing against my grain.

*I didn't understand the meaning

of the word "grain" as far as putting

it in that sentence*

With no appeal, my heart he could clutch:

My reasoning proved to be vain.

* I didn't feel any emotion..like the

words were just wrote..and stopped..nothing

else.

Classic!