I had to read this one twice to really catch it all. I was thrown at first by the "...glistening slit..." on the narrator, but once I got to the part about the fellatio I understood what was meant. I look forward to hearing of more adventures of the narrator.
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this story was recategorized without my approval
It was intended to be an Erptic Couplings story (and was submitted as such).
Recategorizing it is like giving away the punchline before anyone even reads it. I would have written it entirely differently had I known.
Frankly, I'm appalled/
Excellent story!
I had to read this one twice to really catch it all. I was thrown at first by the "...glistening slit..." on the narrator, but once I got to the part about the fellatio I understood what was meant. I look forward to hearing of more adventures of the narrator.
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