All Comments on '"Mediterranean" Goddess'

Well crafted story. You articulated your insight into the whole teaching experience so well I have to guess you've been there, done that for at least part of the story. I found myself empathizing with Carl very quickly having been in front of a class many times and having many of the same thoughts. That whole paternal thing is spot on and probably the only thing that protects my sanity at those times when warm fall or spring weather brings out the eye candy. Similarily, I agree that watching the lights come on and the faces light up when the concept finally takes root is really a huge reward, even compared to clicking submit to send off a manuscript. While I've had a few that approached Mandy's character, none have gone so far as to make the offer which is also a good thing for continued sanity. I've never had anyone approaching a Maria so it made a very enjoyable "what if" tale for me. Classes start in a few days and I know I will be replaying this story in my head as the students file in. Maybe I will use the photo trick to learn names faster. Thanks on many levels.

Great story! Loved it!

Awesome story

Pretty good story, though I rather wish the main character had had sex with Mandy.

and I enjoyed it very much. Your story flowed very well and all the way through it maintained continuity. You obvisously have written numerous stories or you are very gifted one or the other. I will continue to look for more of your stories. Please keep writing.

Very well written and grippingly entertaining....keep it up!

Awesome ..Really enjoyed

This story was awsome. It is the kind of story I could read over and over. PLEASE

keep up the good work...

WIMP

Wonderfully woven story of love and sex. The best "erotic" story I can ever remember

reading. Could not put it down.

you are a writer. The only feedback I can give is to polish up your grammar skills as you made a couple tense errors.

The main thing is, you have the gift of storytelling, I hope you use it well.

Lots of twists and turns to keep the story interesting! Good job!

I’m not one for short, vulgar erotica’s so it’s hard to find something longer but not too long. And majority aren’t even interesting, but this, This gave an incredible backstory which played so much more into the arousal during the more sexual parts.

Excellent job! Very well done! Perfect finish. Keep writing.

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