All Comments on 'Darla & Sarah'

by darkangel001

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ALittleAwkwardALittleAwkwardover 12 years ago
Very nice.

I generally go for stories with more of a buildup, but the quality of your writing is such that I didn't mind the short length. You somehow managed to breathe some life into these girls in so few words, which is an impressive feat. And, of course, it was nice and steamy. Well done. Hope to see more.

KathyFKathyFover 12 years ago
Very Promissing And Lovely

Your Story Was Great. I Loved The Build

Up To The Night Of Sexual Satisfaction.

I Hope You Continue This With Chapter 2

Or Enlighten Us With More Of Your Lesbian

Themed Stories

Kisses

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Start.

Love the fact it was based in my area, Shreveport/Bossier.

darkangel001darkangel001over 12 years agoAuthor
By the way...

I was thinking of Megan Fox & Kristen Stewart...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved it~

What a great story :3 not to mention banging a mechanic is one of my fantasies too (:

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