by darkangel001
I generally go for stories with more of a buildup, but the quality of your writing is such that I didn't mind the short length. You somehow managed to breathe some life into these girls in so few words, which is an impressive feat. And, of course, it was nice and steamy. Well done. Hope to see more.
Your Story Was Great. I Loved The Build
Up To The Night Of Sexual Satisfaction.
I Hope You Continue This With Chapter 2
Or Enlighten Us With More Of Your Lesbian
Themed Stories
Kisses
What a great story :3 not to mention banging a mechanic is one of my fantasies too (: