by Oldguy45
Wow. I love the beginning. You've set quite a scene. Love the detail. I'm ready for the fun to start.
make following chapters longer, noone needs another rpsuch
No, this is not all there is,
This author is one of the best I have read.
Just keep your pants on, it will be coming.
And, I am a cougar.
I agree with the person that defended OldGuy45. This author is a master of character development.