Angela and Vonda Ch. 09

Transitions

Very interesting events afoot.

With Vonda apparently on the way out, Angela's former keepers planning some sort of 'rescue' and Angela herself usurped by Mary things really feel like they are in flux.

Looking forward to part 10.

what happened to chapter 10?

love this story

Part ten a few days away?

A few days!?!?!

Part 10?

I am hoping that this story has not been forgotton.

Another "failure to finish" author.

I wish Lit would not allow an author to post unfinished stories. This is a perfect example. The author drops the story, leaving the readers to question why they ever started to read the story in the first place. No author should be allowed to post unfinished stories and then go along and post OTHER stories. BAH! I gave you a "1" because I can't rate you lower.

Not just bad

EPICALLY BAD! And made worse by the fact that the author couldn't be bothered to finish the story. When is Lit going to either not let writers post partial stories or ban authors that do?

Stupid shit author can't be bothered to finish his half assed stories. Never reading you again.

Totally agree

Another unfinished read...don't bother starting it

Unfinished

After 4+ years, an unfinished story ought to be deleted or at least flagged as being unfinished at the beginning of the first page. As it is, this author's rating has been severely decreased, IMHO.