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more!!!!!!!
liked it alot keep writing please
I'm liking this, nice wry humour.
This is a very good start. I enjoy the humor in this storyline. I can see some very humorous future scenes between your main character and her love interest; whatever you do do not rush it take your time and develop this story. I wanted to read more of this story.
good start
It was a good start to a story, but you should mark when you change perspective.
A promising start---
Two mavericks paired for the royal court...much excitement ensues!
Great Start
Can't wait to see what happens.
i loved this!
REally can't wait to read the next chapter - hurry!!!
Nice!
This story has great potential. Nicely set up. How soon can we expect more?
I enjoyed this
Delightful beginning made me smile.Well written, keep up the good work.
Liked It
I agree with the comment "you should mark when you change perspective" and the comments made by honeeBEE. This story has great potential, so take your time. I cannot wait to see how you proceed.
Superb!
The rest will be welcomed.
great
well yes the changing pov is not that smooth but i love, laugh and will definitely wait for the next chapters - nee
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