All Comments on 'Zachary & Ciara Ch. 05'

At last an update. Mspat I understand. I have been ready for an update forever. Well it seems that Mrs. Collins and Abigail has been jack by Colin. Colin got just what he just deserve. Mrs. Collins better leave her son alone.

Been waiting like forever and am glad you have not abandoned this lovely story. Hope your subsequent updates will not take too long, thanks.

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Five.

Anywho... I'm so looking for the next chapter I hope we see ch.6 soon. His mom and wanna be wife is trying my nerves. Collin had the best world because he had education a great paying job and good friends. So what they had more money than him I bet his ass wasn't paying for most things when they went out to clubs or flew his ass to America on their private planes.... Just Greedy

Holy crap!!! It's been so long I totally forgot about this story so finding it was definitely a treat. I think I've fallen in love with Alexander!! Now if you could just let him kick the dog shit out of Zach's mother and Abigail then I will be completely smitten!!! I think Zach is really going to have to beat the hot mess out of Colin to get his point across!! That would be fun to read about!!! Great chapter but stop taking so long to write and post them PLEASE!!!!

Welcome back Mspat. I thought you abandoned this story. Thanks for reviving it. Keep writing. You are so talented.

Nauti Nymph

those 2 women need to be ran over by a dump truck.uit meddling

I'm glad to see that you are back writing, and continuing this story.

Those two shrews are a meddling mess!! Best buddy Colin is a sleaze. And how about Ciara's hateful sister? Nooooo, Colin doesn't have a gambling problem. He just hustled 11 thousand pounds out of those two witches for useless information all for charity. lol

The more they try to break them apart, the more Ciara and Zach will be drawn to each other.

I can't wait to read more!!!

Colin is a nutso asshole, but I'm ROTFLMFAO at him playing Emily and Abigail for cash...that's what they get *laughs* Is it wrong for me to want him to continue duping them throughout the fiction until he himself gets what he truly deserves? HeeHee

Loved the update and cannot wait for the next -Mel

to mention how much I absolutely LOVED that roundhouse kick to Colin's face, I literally jumped up and down...that was side-splitting!

I'm so happy you didn't abandon Zachary & Ciara's story. Great update...I truly enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to more updates please!

I want to get re-interested in this story but not sure I can wait another two years to see how it turns out. Especially since I don't think the "stay the hell of of my life" really hit home. I don't wish upon stars and I can say....if another chapter appears. You left it with the two witch panel not being phased at all. The story missed the mark in the point.

happy to see u back. i enjoyed this story but thought it was lost, i was happy to see a new chapter. i am waiting for my next fixed hoping for a baby by chapter 8, but that's just me.

you need an editor really badly.

Liked the story, his mother and this Abigail are bitches!

I want to know why the only acceptable brown in the world is fuckin' UPS???

Just by virtue of color, those bitches feel they need to CORRECT that man's decision.

Well, we shall see won't we?

If i could like a comment i would like yours Alpha_Marm and I am now hoping Zach knocks her up and they have their happily ever after and kick colin's ass again!

This is the best chapter yet. I read this in the middle of the night and I had to cover my face with my pillow so as not to wake up my roommates with my laughter. This is an awesome story. I hope it continues.

I hate a vindictive bitch!! They make the story good but uuuuuggghh!!!

They're only pushing Zach towards Ciara to blinded by their own agenda. Let's see what else Colin comes up with and I'll be glad when Zach knocks him out. We should also mention how well Ciara went into Mama Bear mode when Colin grabbed Emilee. The one thing I like more than anything is how Ciara and Zach are honest with each other. Zach let slip to his mother about paring ways with Ciara good thing Abigail didn't catch that slight of tongue. Brie is not a very nice person and that's putting it nicely.