Just read the whole series and while Ch.03 being basically repeated (but actually an improved rewrite) at the start of Ch.04 kind of threw me a bit, as a whole the story is HOT! In fact, I'd enjoy another chapter or two!
As to the Anonymous critic - we've all read a book or watched a movie and thought "What a waste of time and money"! On this site we receive FREE entertainment! If we don't like a story we can stop reading it & even NOT award any stars! So why abuse the authors who offer us this free entertainment without any payment or other reimbursement for their time and effort? Let's use the "Feedback" feature to praise and show our appreciation for their hard work! And as we were taught as children "if we don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all"! Or at the most offer "constructive criticism"
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It was HOT
Just read the whole series and while Ch.03 being basically repeated (but actually an improved rewrite) at the start of Ch.04 kind of threw me a bit, as a whole the story is HOT! In fact, I'd enjoy another chapter or two!
As to the Anonymous critic - we've all read a book or watched a movie and thought "What a waste of time and money"! On this site we receive FREE entertainment! If we don't like a story we can stop reading it & even NOT award any stars! So why abuse the authors who offer us this free entertainment without any payment or other reimbursement for their time and effort? Let's use the "Feedback" feature to praise and show our appreciation for their hard work! And as we were taught as children "if we don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all"! Or at the most offer "constructive criticism"
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