A Woman's Place Ch. 05

nooo! It can't be finished! I have loved this series so much, and now its over?? You had better ensure that you right another one, soon. You are my favourite author, and i can't wait for a new idea. 5 stars!!

Hamsters?

Gonna have me scratching my head all morning with that one.

Having enjoyed all your other stories, I knew there would be a happy ending with this one as well. I think this was a great story but I am in the expansion camp. Maybe sometime soon, now that you've got the essential story out of your head, you can expand the events and characters and further define the society you created. There is so much you could do and so many places you could go with an expanded version.

Great job Mello, congratulations!
GG

i luv it!

amaxing story but im really sad its ending please write another series!

Fuck.

It's over. What the fuck do we do now?

I'm very flattered to see one of my ideas in the little italics part at the beginning, thank you.

Seriously...this was much more gentle than what I usually enjoy, very light on sex at all...but it was the greatest fucking story I read here, period. Thank you, so very very much, MelloT. You're the Karate Kid. You're the best around. Thank you.

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can we have more stories running on this theme? i like the whole dystopia thing.. and to put it in a sexual context is akin to 1984 or the handmaids tale by margaret atwood... two of my top books! please please please can we have more on the same theme?!

yeah

Your writing was excellent. The story idea was great. I didn't like the ending but for My own personal reasons, nothing at all to do with your abilities. To Me, Ellie learned nothing. She lucked out. Someday she will meet someone she likes better and she'll leave Ben. He will have done all the work to get her out and "free".... and she will use that freedom against him.

amazing!

i loved the story plot and the way you told it was beautiful! what a happy ending :) keep writing, it was brilliant!

omg

AMAZING!!! i knew it was Ben all along tho, considering otherwise woudl be a reallyf ucked up way to end a fantasy. happy ending is always good way to go!! damn. imtotally favorting this
~darkpriestess

Two Thumbs Up!

Great job! This story wasn't the usual Literotica fare.

Excellent

This is the first series I've read all the way through, and it was well worth it. Thank you!

I strongly suspect you have read A Handmaids tale at some point. If you havn't it is by Margaret Attwood. I think you would enjoy it.

Awesome!

The sex was hot, but the story was beautiful too, good job and please keep writing!

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I really enjoyed the first few chapters of this story but the end feels like such a cop out. You could have easily had several more chapters describing how they spent the year before they moved. Ended far far too early and lacked story depth because of it.

Sorry.

SO, all the nurses in the hospitals

were grabbed? So all the male patients died? A very unsmart way to provide employment for all the lazy men who never had any desire to work.

27-32 year old single english heterosexual woman with a severe psychosis

Please stop writing! I rated every one of your stories a 1* since that's as low as I could go! You would fit in well with the mohammedan caliphate, but then, you'd be illiterate, as you couldn't read or write! Please don 't breed! You need to be taken out of the gene pool!

Unless, you are writing Juvenalian satire ala Jonathan Swift, but in that case, three separate series with the same sickness? Really?

I really liked this story! It was so sweet how Ben came back for her

THANK GOD...

this was pure fiction... fine fiction for sure, but fiction and not reality! Ladies let's all hope that some idiot PM, President or other world leader doesn't decide at some future date to implement a law of this nature. I enjoy a bit of role play,. light bdsm, etc., but wouldn't want to be a real slave, nor would I want that for my daughters or granddaughters. Sexual or any other kind of slavery should never be forced upon anyone... I know it does happen, and that's unfortunate and thankfully it's totally illegal!! Hopefully it will one day be eradicated!!!

Excellent story!!!!!

Of course, I'm glad this isn't real, but that's why you wrote it, as a piece of (spectacular) fiction, and you didn't try to make it happen... The comment (possibly plural, but I didn't read that far) saying that this is terrible because of slavery and everything fails to realize that this is a fantasy, and it's okay to have any sort of fantasy as long as attempts aren't made to put the darker ones into action across the board in "real life." Having gotten that out of the way, I'd like to commend you on the thoroughly engaging plot and well-written story. It's so different from anything I've read before, and I was fascinated the whole time! Great work!