All Comments on 'My First Gangbang'

Maybe you'll write another, after being elevated to the third grade!

i loved it, would love to do it just like that, not knowing any of them and taking them all, maybe all black also

Very hot and sexy, write another episode,

it makes me want to try that, been so long since i have,

all would have to be strangers so hot

every girls dream to be fucked like that, looking for another hot time by her

This is indeed my fantasy. Hard cocks pounding my holes and spewing hot cum in and on me.....mmmmmmm good.

The actality, however, is unlikely to be quite so sweet. Still, you make clear the line when you switch tense, just in case any of the more idiotic readers convince themselves you're describing a real-life scenario.

Very well written and I hope it inspires others to fulfill their fantasy, too!

Great story and similar to experiences I have witnessed!

Only one involved being fully stuffed, lol. Anal and no condoms were very rare. I would recommend condoms with strangers.

I have helped couples and women fulfill this fantasy with the help of craigslist too. They all loved it, are still living, and usually want more. There are a few nice and respectable men willing to help and follow your rules. Yes, like her story indicated, there are spam bots and less desireables, but they are easily weeded out.

I am more than happy to help others with advice etc ;-) Just contact me from my bio, or gmail... iteachu559@gmail.com

Naughtydad469

Good story but you said Tom's cum was running out of your pussy when it should have been Doug's cum since he was the first ONE.

I advertised much the same,got lots of idiot replies but like you,about to give up,when a woman rang and said she would like to make an enquiry on her husbands behalf.They were older guys,4 of them,all over 50,worked with each other.Their house,she would be there,willing to pay,my limits respected.I agreed.I arrived,they were all dressed in suits,she offered me a drink,then we all undressed except her,she was a very large woman,they moved to me and i soon had a cock in my mouth and one in my pussy.I must say that from the very first cock i was wet,they were gentle and all 4 filled my pussy.However the highlight was the wife who,watching was approached by her husband,got undressed,sucked his cock,then another and because of her size,was taken doggy style by 2 of the guys.She obviously enjoyed it.

This is a fantastic framework for a story, you should build it slower and as you introduce a character try to describe them. It makes it a lot more erotic if the reader has a descriptive picture in their minds eye. Also when you name each one give them a difference. For example "X" was tall about 6 foot very muscular with a rugged tan and very thick average size cock. Whilst "Y" was about two inches shorter in height with a slender figure and a longer cock that was accentuated by his total lack of pubic hair. etc

In the lift take time to describe the anticipation and the smells. I think I could improve this with some editing, you should try.

What did the fourth guy do? Next chapter please - she needs four cocks in her at the end - take it slow, lots of detail....

I Think I can guess your hair color :-)

Good story .. could believe it happened ..any females reading this must fantasize about being there .. the very brave only experience it ..well done

Shake = No

Nod = Yes

Nice story!!!

Excellent story, thank you.

Loved it! But that's not exactly how I remembered it. Thank you again, for the best damn business trip ever. RT