Poorly written, crap spelling over and over. How many times do we have to say "proof reader". Get an editor too as that MAY help.
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Anonymous09/05/11
need a new bio
i read your bio and if you really want to make the readers cum then start writing decent stories these are crap.
as far as anonymous comments go not every one has a personal computer some use public or work one and risk being banned or fired if they join sites like this.
if you want to pay for a computer for every one and the internet connection also we would be happy to join and be members.
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Anonymous09/05/11
WHAT A DUMBASS!!!!
STUPID! STUPID! STUPID! STUPID!
WHAT A WASTE.....LITEROTICA SHOULD NEVER HAVE ALLOWED YOU (& YOUR KIND OF AUTHORs) TO REGISTER.
YOU SUCK CRAP...YOUR SHITE STORIES SUCK WORSE....GET A LIFE, & AN EDITOR.....PULEAZE..
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Anonymous09/07/11
The ' Oh by the way ' type of stories are painful
Don't tack on little tidbits of background. Either flesh them out or don't bother.
It's more than a little pathetic that supposed adults can see the category of your story, read it and suddenly become offended by the subject...or worse, by the grammar or spelling. Personally, I loved your story...and if there are no grammar or spelling errors in this note it's only because before writing I paused long to rub one out. Keep writing, there are plenty of us here who will keep reading and enjoying!
English
Don't bother
Poorly written, crap spelling over and over. How many times do we have to say "proof reader". Get an editor too as that MAY help.
need a new bio
i read your bio and if you really want to make the readers cum then start writing decent stories these are crap.
as far as anonymous comments go not every one has a personal computer some use public or work one and risk being banned or fired if they join sites like this.
if you want to pay for a computer for every one and the internet connection also we would be happy to join and be members.
WHAT A DUMBASS!!!!
STUPID! STUPID! STUPID! STUPID!
WHAT A WASTE.....LITEROTICA SHOULD NEVER HAVE ALLOWED YOU (& YOUR KIND OF AUTHORs) TO REGISTER.
YOU SUCK CRAP...YOUR SHITE STORIES SUCK WORSE....GET A LIFE, & AN EDITOR.....PULEAZE..
The ' Oh by the way ' type of stories are painful
Don't tack on little tidbits of background. Either flesh them out or don't bother.
Bad.
Just....... Bad.
Don't worry about the jerks
It's more than a little pathetic that supposed adults can see the category of your story, read it and suddenly become offended by the subject...or worse, by the grammar or spelling. Personally, I loved your story...and if there are no grammar or spelling errors in this note it's only because before writing I paused long to rub one out. Keep writing, there are plenty of us here who will keep reading and enjoying!
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