The poem was sort of cute, but you begging for 5s "for your ego" ruined anything you wrote. It saddens me to think people may get high points for chatting on the bulletin boards and begging their "friends" to vote high.
Sorry it was ruined for you. It was a joke. Obviously wasn't taken as one I see. If my ego really rested on this poem and the feedback or votes I got from it, I'd be crushed with your one vote and my loss of H just now. :D
Have a nice day. :)
After reading a few grim [read, serious sex] Literotica stories this evening, your humor made my day. Loved it!
I have to give this one a 5. It's the humor that makes this story stand out from the crowd.
Written tongue in check
Very clever...I'll never hear Old MacDonalds Farm the same again!
Tooo cute, You made me giggle!!!
To heck with the downers!
That was funny....Good Job
.....laughing, grinning, and wishing I wrote this!!! Cute as a pair of overalls with nothing underneath.....
and the farmers daughters. TK U MLJ LV NV
That was hillarious! Entertaining and possibly . . educating for someone who is learning the art . . of "poetry" . . .what did you think I was thinking? LOL
I am not usually a poetry man but I just loved this.
As another commentator put it I will never hear 'Old MacDonald' again without a dirty mind flash.
You asked for it, you deserve it. 5#
Very good though I like the poems more raunchy and detailed.
Not quite how I remember EIEIO But much better than the one I knew as a child.
I really enjoyed it..Especially the Lick Lick here and the Suck Suck there...
Delightful and fun; nothing as arousing as a poem about getting my cock sucked unless it's her making me eat her pussy; love an aggressive woman. Very cute poem. firstname.lastname@example.org
I am happy to give you a five for that, damppanties, it really made me smile ! Would go well at a hen night after a few sips of wine !
your little ditty made me hard
oh yeah oh yeah ohhh
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