The Balance in Love Ch. 01

Great Start

So glad that you're back to writing. Hopefully everything is going well for you! Can't wait for the next update.

History

2nd World War 1939 - 1945 not 44. Answer given to Stella's question was hilarious.
Well did it happened, but not the cause. Read some history before using it in a story and get the facts right. I'm not reading next chapter(s).

Re: Hansbwl's comment

Hansbwl,

I'm actually minoring in History and I know a lot about World War 2, I was making Stella out to be a ditz, she's not the main character. She's based off of someone I know in real life who thinks she's smarter than she is and in reality, knows nothing about anything.

I like your stories! And don't listen to certain people telling you to get your facts right before writing. Jealousy is a terrible thing, especially when their stories are terrible and boring!! I love reading your work!