All Comments on 'Tikikana'

I am a man not a wife but I LOVED this story. Don't care how you categorize your stories just keep writing them. Excellent job. Do consider an additional "summer special" involving another married beauty being seduced by an unsavory character: albeit person, animal or vegetable.

Thanks.

Well-written, imaginative, and hot as hell. Outstanding story!

Wow, no telling for taste, i read where a couple of comments were very positive. Ididn't like it but i quess i could beto narrow minded.

Absolutely dumbfounded by this story. For a while it could have been a snuff story. The serpent should have pierced her beautiful tits, each one, instead of her neck. Her husband could have become a useless, sexless drone, disenfranchised from ever using his goddess wife, forced to watch her every sexual adventure suspended in hyper-space throughtout all time. Serves him right for marrying a woman belonging to all eternity.

This story has opened a whole new universe view. Magnificent.

Nice job. Might belong in Sci/Fantasy, but good story so who cares. Hope we see more from you. LW is where the harshest and most irrational critics hang out.

Well, who cares what the critics have written. It is a great story and it will be enjoyed by the vast majority of readers who open it. Is there a sequel coming? I hope so. Keep writing and i will keep reading. I look forward to more of your work.

Please write more please please.......

Loved It By The Way

Good but in the wrong category. What happened next? When one or the other didn't return home did the police get involved? What about the parents - when their daughter or son or both returned with different people what happened? The fantasy on the island was well written but they should have been reunited to go home with a hugely different perspective on sex. A series of stories about their encounters with others could then follow.

Sorry it didn’t work for me.