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FINALLY DRAMA AND MYSTERY
every other submission hot and cold. TK U MLJ LV NV
too short with way too many chapters
Your style of submission is a real put-off. I only just started reading this a couple days ago; not sure if I'll continue since you only are releasing one thought/page per day. I Don't understand the strategy here unless you have some agreement with the site to attempt to keep folks coming back day after day for one more crumb of info. You're a good writer -- you shouldn't treat your readers like this.
meanwhile
back at the Ranch... Tonto who was disguised as a door... got his knob shot off
Poor format
Concur with other poster that short chapters are reader unfriendly and disrupt reading. Got strain injury by clicking each chapter. Bad choice
Wait hold up
Haven't finished yet, just barely started, but did anyone else feel like the author was preaching to us readers on patience needed when reading this story? Just wondering.
Lit does what it wants
If I submitted all 84 chapters at once they would post one per day. It's not my policy.
No longer interesting
This started out as a good story but now as fallen apart ,I mean what else can go wrong in two peoples lives.Could be the format author has chosen to tell the story.
Do it your way
It's your story to tell as you see fit. It's our choice to read it or not. Well I'm still reading.
Jeff The Torturer
I don't get why Jeff is dragging this out. I can imagine that he is getting tired of getter jerked around. Maybe, he is gathering evidence? Hmm....
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