All Comments on 'The Laundromat'

By the way, oral sex on a female is cunilingus not fellatio.

The story was well written, but ended too quickly. Should extend story beyond the final orgasm, perhaps teasing with what might happen next.

Much more

So ... now that our young friend has discovered exhibitionism ... what does she do next? Perhaps in the library, or somewhere on campus?

very nice! Well done, love the theme, thinking of buying a laundromat near a college... Great story!

I'm glad you all liked it.

@Anonymous, I did not know that.... I'm new to this world. Thank you for telling me. I'll change it when I get the chance.

Really a nice story.... love the way you describe everything.

is it a real story ? and if yes .. how did you feel about the whole incident ?

I've been coming to this website for years, and this ranks amongst my top 10 short stories. I demand more! mORE! Your audience clamors!

Great story for a first attempt...

The story went too far & out of the exhibitionism genre for me. I think "Erotic Couplings" would be the proper section for it.

Looking forward to more of your works!

I'm glad you are all enjoying this.

I have 3 more in my head right now: a sequel and two unrelated stories. I just need to get a moment to write them out.

As for the genre... I wasn't sure, so I just picked one. It doesn't look like I can change it at this point, but I will be more careful in the future.

I will let you decide whether you want to believe this happened or not... it's more fun that way ;)

such a wonderful story! I wish i was her....*pouts

Pretty good story. I came here to become more comfortable with writing the exhibitionist/voyeur genre and this is the first one I clicked on; pretty much loved it. :)