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please
more more more more please!!
please please
more more more more please!!
This is a fantastic story I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
Clearing things up
Just so I can understand Sam and the father of Niala's son are two different people right? Because you said that the father was a great dad so I just want to know these are two different people we're talking about?? P.S. I'm enjoying it so far.
Re: Clearing things up
Yes, Sam is not Sean's father. I don't think that his father will play a major role in the story. He is in the past-past. Sam is more recent so it has an affect on Austin. Thank you :)
Looking ahead
I haven't read chapter 3 yet but I'm about to & I see that you haven't posted chapter 4 & you should beacause dispute the bad grammar, & punctuation I'm hooked on this story.
Great
move tohave them meet at the club and dance kiss then dismiss each other for she wants what she deserves and he is not ready for that yet. Samuel is so far off of her radar, but realizes....YOU NEVER MISS A GOOD THING TIL IT'S GONE!!!
great, but...
you really need to work on your grammar and vocabulary. if you get an editor, and if you already have one, i mean no offense. it's just that your sentences are sometimes hard to follow. the storyline is great, but it sort of falls flat because of the grammar mistakes.
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