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it's about the choices made
He was right, it was his fault to a point. He wanted to see her with another man, "once". and it should have ended there but he did open the door. After that one time it was all her. She couldn't stop, and wanted him to except it or else. He choose the for else and they both lost. But in the end she lost even more because she left for some dream cock that was just another cheating ass like her.
Seed of a good story
but it needs to grow more. It seemed too rushed. You have a good thing here, go back and do the full treatment and skip the cliff's notes version.
By the way, it's "one-of" not "one off". It is short for "one-of-a-kind". I have seen it mis-used many times on this site.
CHEATERS REMORSE
having to learn how to live with a bad ultimatum. TK U MLJ LV NV
No doubt, she deserved her consequences...
sadly, he as a wimp, he took pity on her and allowed her to come back and enjoy the fruit of his labor [sluts typically just take advantage of the recent sucker, as did his former wife (now a simplistic whore)]. Frankly, he would have been much farther ahead had he just put her out of her misery early on - what a frigging waste of oxygen (similar to that fag called shoe-no-frigging -clue}.
One-Off
Meaning one time only! This is a complete story, embellish a different one - this one is just fine!
Short but to the point. Sad, in that he lost the one thing he married for, love and companionship.
Thanks.
Some Stories Have No Heroes
Well written slice of life. Its like a song that ends on a flat note but thats part of what makes it real.The ending didn't pander to the TTB demographic so I'm giving five stars to author on a courage and skill basis. Want a festering testosterone laden fable with a clear cut happy ending for 'the good guy'? Go rent a John Wayne flick.
no winners only losers
but why why why did you make Eileen so fucking stupid? I mean, really, who talks like that: "I can't live without his cock." Noone says shit like that.
Well, duh!!!!
Pick a metaphor: "you opened Pandora's Box" or "the genie is out of the bottle" or whatever else.
Fiction and fantasy are, indeed, entertaining. But this story gets closer to reality than most. One can only wonder how often this scenario has proven to be...reality.
Nice! five-star!
Short, realistic, and to the point
I gave you 5 stars.
Very good!
Good Job!
I considered it very realistic. You were nicer to her than I'd have been.
I liked it.
This seems about the way the whole thing would work out.
Redundant and predictable story plot for the whole thing. People still repeat the sequence. She can be removed and for her to deal with what she created.
sad
sad and stupid story, husband is an idiot
pretty sad
and the dumbest he did is taking her back to bed besides never looking for someone he could love again.
Lacking detail
You hit most of the main points but it was seriously of the story lacking any detail or emotion. A good story should have the readers emotions bouncing all around. I could have been reading the classified ads and generated more emotion.
lacking detail?????
first of all the husband was a wimp. I have read many dtories that started "I have always my wife to have sex with another man..." Well asshole you got your wish so live with it. the wife was (is) a drippy cunted whore skank. The Kids without both parents just cause this wimp asshole wanted to watch his wife...oh well.
Okay, the husband was a cuck wimp! But, once she got the message and wanted to "come back" why not use the cunt?
Free available pussy, is still good. Just don't take any "wife" shit from the whore.
And??
What about the juicy details??, our hubby pointed out the things she did for her lover but not for him, did our husband extract the same services from her when he took her back to his bed?? Devil is in the details... Inquiring minds want to know?
Miserable story
WHY would both people subject themselves to such a miserable existence? It's like they are the only two people left in the world and he cannot love her. How about manning up? He pushed her into it. He's a moron. She was an arrogant ass for extending it into an affair. Why have her move in? And after all the years go by and she is basically loyal to him, why can't he let go of something that was largely his own fault? It's like finding out your house is infested with bedbugs and deciding to do absolutely NOTHING about it. Really fucked up people resulting in a really fucked up story. Oh, their kids are probably really fucked up too, living in this nut house.
Lucksmith "Let The Punishment Fit The Crime" is a excellent MORE HUMOROUS story than this is. This story is not humorous at all.
Wimp or not wimp
Sad story. I think if they had not had any children he would not have taken back first to his hous and later to his bed. The kids cause main problem for a clean solution. The clean solution=100% separation.
Dumfuck !!
If he hadn't started to nag the hell outta her,to meet one of HIS fantasies,their now sterile Life wouldn't BE like that!
Serves him right - Dumfuck!!!
No clue about the ending
Why do they have the men get all angry and stomp their feet and make all kinds of noise just to let the woman back in with little to no punishment?
The courts would say that they are remarried after living together for 7(?) years.
No this is a lose/lose ending. Let them move on and find love and happiness in their lives.
Ifron are you like a MORON?
The wife agreed to try another man ... she set her term. The Husband met those terms.
The WIFE said it would be ONLY a time thing.
how does that make the husband responsible for her cheating with the other guy (Gary) for 3 months?
well done
Good story of letting the genie out of the bottle.
Actually it is "ONE OFF" dumbass anon...
...notice that it is the brits that use this term? It's short for "one time and I'm off" dumbass, not one of a kind. Sheesh! the story was just o.k. No real fleshing out of characters or behavioral premises.
When you open your marriage to others you open yourself to the consequences. In this instance the fantasy obviously didn't live up to the reality. Yes she got a dose of what he went through but he wouldn't have gone through it if he hadn't brought it up.
A tightly written story
Very fast paced, but still easy to follow. A complete story even though it is short.
A good read, thanks
To live together without remarried
Many other (discused) writers write their reconcilation stories to that direction that the exhusbands do not start a new mariage with earlier exwives. They live together without new wedding. I remember Matt Moreau, lucksmith some reconcilation stories. I think this would be a suitable solution for a reconcilation. The exhusband lives his own house/condo and after a new relapsus (cheating) he could kick out the cheating exwife at once without any lawyer, judge.
Quick read but straight to point! Well done
Well written, right to the heart! Shows that even communication can't change but at least was tried (not always shown in so many stories). Was supposed to be one time!? Some doors just shouldn't be open and so many other metaphors...
Good story, SAD but so is life for many people!
5 stars
Thanks for posting
Lame
Really Really Really Lame.
Dave the Dickhead
This guy is about as juvenile as it gets.
Realistically though, he would not have got such a good result in court since he initiated the fiasco.
Too Far
Permission to do it once does not mean your home is his new whorehouse, and your wife his new whore. She screwed up big time.
Wow sloppy seconds,thirds, fourths and on and on
I guess some men like other men's cast offs
Thanks
For Sharing.
Decent
Good story. Lesson learned. Be careful what you wish for. Dave ruined his life because he wanted to be a cuck. I don't care if he only wanted it to be just that one time. It was one time too many. Everything was his fault. Fuck him. Live life loveless.
HA
CUCKS
What sort of sicko would want to watch his wife being fucked by another man.
Jackor Chuck
For a new handle you sure got boring real quick asshole.
He
He got a cheap housekeeper to raise his kids and a little pussy after the kids were gone.
just nuther
1 star self cucka doodle do tale
Comments on your writing
I like the theme of all your stories. Everyone is responsible for their actions and each action has consequences. Bloody good Keep it up.
Well this has been done before and much better
Nothing in the writing convinces me that she would have taken a lover in the first place. It seemed to be so alien to the personality you gave her. And when he moved her back in I don't see how how would rebuff her advances while the kids were there and after they leave take her back into his bed? That made no sense. And you never really covered what the kids were doing while all this was going on. Sorry, but this was too incomplete to be considered any good.
Why is he the "good guy"?
He forced the issue in the first place. She went along and, granted, took it far longer than he wanted, but still, he forced the issue. Unfortunately, she was hurt in the end. He still deserved the blame for the whole problem.
DOES THE USE IT OR LOSE IT
when other do the IT. TK U MLJ LV NV
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A little problem here,.....
I can assure you that if she got custody, she'd get the house. In fact whoever got custody would get the house until the kids reached 18, or unless they remarried with another house available.
Needs to be at least reasonable
Children stay with the house. Courts first priority is the children. I understand you wanted to show the pressure on the cheaters' relationship but that's not available to you via the house vs apartment route. .
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