All Comments on 'A Mother's Change? Ch. 04'

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mBrowmBrowover 12 years ago
A little fantastic?

Well, sure it's fantasy, perhaps the basis for Literotica. The short stories seem a little simple, but we are enjoying the progression. Keep going, please!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
So far a good read

I can only imagine that her mission will be to procreate babies for the alien beings.

The good thing is that it has to be pleasurable to her.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please continue, very good so far.

I like this story line, I slightly agree with the shortness of the chapters but if this is getting the story updated sooner I like that part also. You are doing a good job of making it hard to predict plot movements. So far a good three to four star effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

these were coming fast and furious and now nothing. when's the next one coming?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wanting more.

This story is totally awesome, I hope you continue ?

blueyedbobblueyedbobover 11 years ago
this is just the prequel, right??

the really sensual erotic tale is yet to come,,,,i hope,,i hope,, i hope!!! 'cause that was great!!

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