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by vestspet09/06/11

Good start, but...

It's incomplete. What happened to John? Did John realize his homosexuality after the threesome? How or why did John call Joe to set up the meeting? When did Joe and Mike decide to ambush John? Did Joe and Mike ever feel conflicted about what they did to John? There are so many gaps in the story the need to be filled. It is a good start to a longer series.

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by frenguy09/06/11

is this the end

their as got to be more to this please

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