by genealguy
what a heap of CRAP!!!! he married the whore knowing she was fucking his brother and was going to continue do so and have his brothers baby not his
This story sucked ass. It made absolutely ZERO sense.
The guy will never find a real woman. No one with a brain would have married this one in the first place. Really quite a dumb story. Sorry
Your a wimp ass bitch because you married that slut and your a punk because you didn't put your foot in your brothers ass.
But no revenge on the cucks part? Also what kind of brother is this, was there no indication beforehand that Ed obviously held his brother in such contempt?
There is no logic on the 'husbands' part just words jerking across the page.
The is the revenge in that the bride should have paid for the wedding, and she is dumped at the reception.
don't bother, this isn't a good hobby for you genealguy, get another one.
This is the worst story ever! I think an elementary school student could do better. Why even bother putting this out into the universe!!!
Thankfully this was so short I only wasted a couple of minutes of my life reading it.
This story is stupid and unbelievable.
The main character is so blinded by love he is ignorant of his girlfriend's true nature until the end. If it were me I would have droped her like a ton of bricks at the picnic. He tried to when she told him he was going to be a cuckold just before the marriage ceremony. I would have said what wedding. I'll be damned if it ever happens. Do you realize how much money is sunk in a wedding. I would not go thru that expense if I know what she would do.
I say he did something abut it a little too late. Wouldn't you?
He married her anyway... Lmfao😂😂😂🤓😂. Please stop writing...
and left your brother in the ER or as they say across the pond the A & E
Leave the entire family, if they favor him so much and you mean so little. Why go thru with the wedding if you're going to do this now it was only going to get worse. This is one of the dumbest stories I've ever read.
... At least, at the very end, the MC walked away.
This lone act of self-respect saved this story from the lowest grade available.
However, it doesn't change its overall worthlessness.
Seems like the author quit trying to write, probably 'cause he was unable to create actually believable characters... good on him.
Kinda boring
But I have a similar story
My wife first dated my brother
Before we met
Well we dated 6 yrs got married
And I was the only man she has had sex with .
Which she always brought up cause she new I had bee with other girls.
Well after about 5 yrs we had a son.
My brother was separated and was at my house for the night .
Took the kid to grandmas house .
We started drinking playing some version of strip poker.
Any way I asked if she wanted to have a new cock since I was the only one .
She was up to it the game was fun we all got naked we were inthe garage /man cave. I told to suck his cock she did then they kissed he played with her beautiful 36 Double DS.
We moved to the bedroom and took turns fucking her. We even DPD her
She got on top of him and came from behind.
She was so amazing. Then the phone rang I had to go get the kid from Grandmas.
I just left them to fuck while I was gone.
Got home put the kid to bed .
They were dressed and having a drink
Soon after I took her back to bed and fucked her some more .
She was very pleased and it happened again a few weeks later .
After we went out dancing and drinking.
Back to my house straight to the bed room. I was on top fucking her and she was sucking his cock at the same time. Best sex ever