What a great story! Wild, weird, sometimes bordering on unbelievable ... and fabulous! In places the dialogue was surreal. None of the same old same old. In a way, I would describe it as the Rocky Horror Picture Show of erotica. Wow!
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Anonymous12/16/16
Ruined
Story started off good but.it was quickly ruined. Just the combination of being highly unrealistic, main character being a selfish prick, and being a stereotypical low life piece of shit calling a game "faggy" while he chums down.beer and tries to.get into every single person's pants. You had sex with 5 different girls? That isn't cool. Nobody is going.to be like "You.have sex with every girl you see? Oh go's you're so cool!!". And it isn't attractive either. Just shows all you care about is sex. Good luck get ring a girlfriend that doesn't have STDs. It was good at first
But you completely and utterly ruined it. I was disappointed when the main character wasn't getting raped in.prison by a big black.guy named Bubba or get beaten the shit.out of and hung by either Bob or Jerry.
English
So very yummy!
Fun and more fun! Thank you!
Too good
Loved it
Surreal
What a great story! Wild, weird, sometimes bordering on unbelievable ... and fabulous! In places the dialogue was surreal. None of the same old same old. In a way, I would describe it as the Rocky Horror Picture Show of erotica. Wow!
Ruined
Story started off good but.it was quickly ruined. Just the combination of being highly unrealistic, main character being a selfish prick, and being a stereotypical low life piece of shit calling a game "faggy" while he chums down.beer and tries to.get into every single person's pants. You had sex with 5 different girls? That isn't cool. Nobody is going.to be like "You.have sex with every girl you see? Oh go's you're so cool!!". And it isn't attractive either. Just shows all you care about is sex. Good luck get ring a girlfriend that doesn't have STDs. It was good at first
But you completely and utterly ruined it. I was disappointed when the main character wasn't getting raped in.prison by a big black.guy named Bubba or get beaten the shit.out of and hung by either Bob or Jerry.
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