"Your Mom is Passed Out?"

Touch em' all !

Make the reader a little nostalgic.
Check.

Make reader horny.
Check.

Take reader to 'forbidden zone'. Have him/her toe the line and then shove them beyond.
Check.

Make reader laugh with skewed logic that makes up in passion what it lacks in critical rigor because afterall this is 'Literotica' and It is ' just a story' .
Check.

Make reader grateful for ' Grand slam' return from TTT!
CHECK!

Welcome back from sabbatical TTT. Thank you for the story.

The boy is psychotic.

Unbelievable story of lust and insanity.

damn it

make sure to follow with daneila

Very great quality...

Perhaps some may consider this work incestrous, but the reality of it is simply a portrayal of boy meets girl under the most unusual circumstances.

Resultantly, a boy grew out of his puberty this day and became a man while a woman captured her lost years of puberty.

The objectivity of love is to feed each other's needs, not simply to fuel them, and whatever the eventual outcome may be, nothing ever will surpass this one event of sharing.

WOnderful authorship...congratulations...!

Went too far

Good story idea but you took it a couple of steps too far. Many lads are hot for friends mom's but peeping and feeling usually is it

Mannnnn....

Man .. what a damn story and to think it could be done with a few drinks and a couple of pills* -- wow what a way to go and then forgive you --- that would be a cherry on top of the ice cream.! Loved the story.

Outstanding

An excellent read.

Excellent

Just plain excellent.

Just curious.....

But do we get to see if the other guy gets with his step sister?

Otherwise, I greatly enjoyed this story, thank you.

Wow!

I was unsure when I first came upon this one but now i'm glad I stopped. Thanks for the killer read!
Minette

Hmmm

Hey with all that sperm up her yahoo, she should get preggos. I would like to see. More on that subject as well. Maybe he gets to fuck the sister first and make her preggo as well.

just great

I hope you'll continue this story because it was good and I think there is more to tell.

Can't suspend disbelief... and for porn that's saying something

As far as porn plots go, this is pretty thin (even for porn), with your characters logic and reactions thinner.

You've written better.

To bad there isn't a "NFW Fantasy" section at Literotica, but perhaps that's a good thing. Too much of the fiction here would fall under the heading "No Fucking Way."

the edge of unreality???

this one is close to the edge of unreal, but who cares, i had a hard on for half an hour reading it

This was barely incest

And a good story should have a likable protagonist. This guy was anything but. The fact that after she realized that she raped him and he kept saying "I love you" and "you want me" I wanted her to kick him in the balls and curb-stomp him. Just terrible.

this is one of the hottedt stories i have read, in my opinion. i loved it so very much. i'd love for you to continue. yes she should get pregnant.

Wow!

I've read others you've written and am still impressed! I think he went a little psycho, crazy love kinda thing, but you could see from the Sauna part, there was opportunity and motive. Played out well and wish I had that kind of stamina! Should deffinitely take it to the next step with Danni. I'm not much for the preggers part of it, I don't think every story of incest or any for that matter has to absolutely end up with someone getting pregnant, it's just nice to read a good fuck tale!

Well Done!

Nice

I was really impressed with this story. I hope you keep going on it. Will the mom help drug Danni? Will Danni have a different reaction when she comes to? Oh, I can't wait to read it.

Glad to see that you are back

Glad to see that you are back, I prefer some of your other stories, but I am still a fan.

Daaaaammmmnn

Wow. Damn. Srsly. Keep
Going.

Thoroughly evil...

...and yet compelling. I've never felt porn (or literature for that matter) should strive to be moral, just to be readable.

And your name DOES specify tall tales. Reminded me of a Chris Miller story, but not quite as funny.

Winner.

You win, hands down. More please!

sad if end

I enjoyed this story very much. It would be sad if this was the end.
It should be just the start!
martha

Over the top is one way to put it...

This is ridiculous. It's preposterous. It's unbelievable. And it's also a fantasy of almost every teenage boy.

Crazy and irresponsible, it was very well written and a lot of fun. Well done!

wow...just wow

dude i swear to god this story is a fuckin miracle. ur one of my fav authors but this is just wow.....im at lost for words. plz we need sequels. i normally favor non consensual stories but this is just really awesome even tho the story flow is kind of cliche' (the woman enjoying it afterwards) but god damn it, this story nay..this well written script should be given more than five stars. much props bro.

This yarn lives up to your pen name

What a story! I kept thinking that it was about to end but it kept going and going, and never slowed down! Definitely one of the very best I've ever read.

that was a very good story!

i would like a sequel but i doubt that will ever happen.

Damn

Took me 2 hours to read on my iphone

Amazing!!

That was the best thing I have ever read. I just couldn't stop reading it. To be honest I'd love to see a book published by you about romance. Thanks for sharing your gift with us!

You are my new hero!

Awe~fucking~some man! That has to be, BY FAR the best sex story I have EVER read. I can't thank you enough! Kudos to you. xD

you are a sexual genius

this has to be THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ i would love more with danni and jerry that way jeremy could have more joy. i definatly think with a lot more embelishment this could easily be a book, that i would buy to read over and over again. THANK YOU Xx its a shame the rating only goes up to a 5 (1,000) Xx

Amazing story

This was simply perfect, would love it if you could make a second to it. :)

Loved it! Hoping for a sequel where Jill becomes Alex's solely, and Danielle becomes Jerry's :)

Absolutely Fantastic!

I'm hoping to see a sequel to this story. One of the best stories I've read on Literotica, please take your time and make the next one as great 110% lovable!!!

Great story

Great story hope there is more to come.

?

Perfect humoristic end for him, would be to wake up in dead-end street with knocked out teeth and baseball bat stucked in the ass!

my fantasy...

is to be fucked while I'm asleep, wake to pleasure like that. Loved it.

Threw me for a loop

First, I thought it was a rape fantasy with some twist. That's what it was. I thought Jerry was going to be the rapist, but no. You played him out well. Most people would rather turn tail and leave, forgetting it ever happened. You did just that and made him human. Alex, on the other hand... He's the kind of guy you kind of don't want to meet. He is fucked up beyond depth. I liked his character, especially when he complimented the mother and eased her into safety. I thought she was gonna slap him and end a dream sequence twist that happened while Alex and Jerry were gaming. But no, it wasn't. I was surprised.

Good job, Tx. If I had a glass, I'd raise it.

Fantastic Story!! We hope for more. .

jerry's character was well played out. Didn't understood the woman. Whether she had planned it or since everything had already happened, so gave into the pleasure. .
Anyway, a lovely story. I would really appretiate if you could write about jerry (or both) seducing/forcing Danielle. .
5*****

That was ... interesting

Hell of a story. Kinda messed up, IMO, but good work.

Great Story

Great story! It was very sexy and well written.

On a side note: I hope cupcakesparky was able to fulfill her fantasy :o)

Excellent, ty

That was an outstanding read. I particularly enjoyed your humour which was, in a way, the icing on the cake for me.

There were just a couple of points where I thought you were going on a bit too long, like a dog chewing a bone, but you moved on just before I got pissed with it.

Overall, that has to be about the best tale I have read on here. I'm glad to have found it and now will go look see what else you might have been up to :-)

Go you !

Dude

It was an awesome story I am glad that I found it. Keep up the awesome writing.

Boy Meets Girl?

Somebody actually said it was a boy meets girl story. More like boy gets away with raping a helpless woman repeatedly story. And the crowd goes wild. Next they will be calling for the rape of young teens. Oh, but it is just a fantasy, right???

This fucker was bat shit crazy and needs to spend some time in the insane asylum. I wonder how many poor saps will read all the supporting comments and decide it is OK to do this in real life.

This story should have been in the rape category. Pathetic.

Incest

Well I am more into the big brother little sister thing but this was an amazing story.

Please write more like this, There are so very few on this site like it.

Holy Shit

Amazing writing. Excellent imagery.

Not so much into incest, myself, but this was incredible through and through.

I'm rather impressed, I really love this story. The detail and the way it flowed was amazing. And also it was well thought out and written, no stumbles at all from the style.

I can't wait to see more from you.

Nice

It was very well worded story showing love lust together and great imagination. I loved it

Yeah Right

Even the REAL superman couldn't stay hard and cum that often.

This would have been more believable if you stopped at the end of page 3 and finished it by saying :-
"I offered no resistance when the cops came for me, and hung my head in self loathing as I realised what a sick fuck of a rapist I was. When the judge sentenced me, I knew I deserved every inch of every filthy convict's cock I was going to have crammed up my ass and down my throat for the next 15 years. If justice was REALLY going to be done, someone would cut my balls off and watch me bleed to death."

Only a really sick bastard would get any pleasure out of brutalising an unconscious woman in the manner depicted in this load of twisted shit. Or writing about it.