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Never Again Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/09/11

Scott logic doesn't even make sense?! It sounds like jealousy, not logic. How can scott NOT understand gia & lori (lori that whore) friendship was longer than their (scott & gia) what... 1 week relationship? He's a dumb slut. Dear writer, Please do not feel like I am bashing you or your story/characters but this is just how I am when I really get into readings. lol. No pressure! Thanks for updating! I can't believe he turn the situation around, trying to make her feel the slightest guilt over their break-up/past. What a jerk, you don't deserve her man--no you don't! Seriously, he needs to man up and so her the man he is now (hopefully, a smart and TRUSTWORTHY lover).

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by Anonymous09/10/11

wow

are all guys named scott dumb?
How can he be mad at her for his deceiving behavior?
it's not her fault he slept wit her friend and lied to her face just to get to her pants. it will be extremely disappointing if she gives him another chance so easily after all these years. you can't make her submit now, it would be severely disappointing.

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by Anonymous09/17/11

Fool

Scott was supposedly intelligent, but it is impossible for me to imagine anyone behaving more stupidly than he did.

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by holydemon0012/07/11

Both characters need to slow down

and use common sense instead of their blind loves to rationalize with. But again, had they used common sense, their romance wouldn't be half as interesting to read as it should be.

Lovely story. And I instantly sympathize with Scott the moment he tried to put the blame back out of sheer jealousy. He sounds just like a proud and radical man who's been hurt by love.

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by kitteh_kat04/09/12

does every fucking chapter...

need to end with gia driving away from scott in tears?
i understand that scott hurt her, but still...
does she have to be so sensitive?
i just don't get it, scott isn't a bad guy!
get a grip, gia.

k_k

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by Sidney4305/19/12

So what has happened with this story? Nothing posted since late 2011 and Scott the idiot is still sticking his foot in his mouth. Frankly, I think the guy is terminally stupid and you should just end the story where it is. Maybe a post script about a card from Gia that she got married and has three kids and it is too bad he was such a dip shit when he had one more chance at her.

As an author, there is a limit in how many times you should go to the "oh we screwed things up again" story line. After a while it loses it effectiveness and readers get tired of the forced drama.

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by Anonymous01/11/16

Delightful story

What a lovely story, thank you so much for writing. Any possibility we can know the ending? You've Done a fantastic job building it up, no one else could do justice in ending it the right way! If not, thanks for the enjoyable read, regardless!

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by HerLittleGuy03/22/16

Disappointed that there is no resolution

I sure hope that you find your muse again, and extend your story. We have hopes that there will be a good resolution to this tale, but with the passage of 5 years, I guess we shouldn't get our hopes up, dear author. Thank you for sharing what you have.

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