All Comments on 'Slow'

I've read a lot of "puppy play" stories. This one is very short and way too repetitive. It's not a story if you just keep writing the same things over and over. And it wouldn't even be as long as it is if you didn't have the characters repeat the same words again and again. Better luck next time.

2 stars.

I like seeing the caring nature the Master presents to his slave! :) Usually everything's so rough and hardcore, but I definitely enjoy reading about Masters who can be tender and realize that a slave needs this side of play as well! Hehe xoxo

And I have a Master like this. I loved your story. 5 stars. I'd give you a hundred if I could.