It's getting GOOD! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Anonymous09/16/11
Getting more involved and interesting. Since you mentioned in the beginning his relationship with Brad and how it led him to having lots of meaningless sex, will there be any relationship at some point? I'm a little unsure why the mobster would have left poor Jess in the car nearly dead. Is he that untouchable? They will allow him to stay at their ranch and do this to others? It just seems crazy. What 'hand' would dare go with him after seeing this?
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It's getting GOOD! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Getting more involved and interesting. Since you mentioned in the beginning his relationship with Brad and how it led him to having lots of meaningless sex, will there be any relationship at some point? I'm a little unsure why the mobster would have left poor Jess in the car nearly dead. Is he that untouchable? They will allow him to stay at their ranch and do this to others? It just seems crazy. What 'hand' would dare go with him after seeing this?
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