All Comments on 'My Daydream'

No such word.......re-orientate.

A girl LOSES herself in a daydream.

"My Daydream - A girl looses herself in a daydream.

Submitted by CitrusBlossom (Mind Control) 09/12/11"

Quickest way to lose a reader is to have an error in the heading. The word is "loses".

few typos but then loads of stories here have those. Nice story idea. Could do with being finished or having a second chapter (maybe either finishing her off or adding another person to the mix) OTherwise a good start

I loved reading your story! It was very exciting; especially since i was just discussing this very type of encounter with a friend of mine.

The story was easy to follow, and not too short or too long. Perfect :)

PH