All Comments on 'Brennus and Victoria Ch. 03'

amazing

B seems like a surprisingly nice man! I hope she opens up m they're able to get a bit more adventurous

It's a bit awkward. Brennus is a strong and confident man, if he had previous experience it would be normal. This story is based in the 18th century or so, it sounds off key and does not flow well.

I like the idea of Brennus trying to win over his wife, but it was all I could do to read this through to the end. I know that it's erotica but authors should still attempt to make it historically accurate! Primarily, the word "ok" is modern and would not have been used in the 18th century!

Thrown = past tense of to throw. adverb. "I was thrown out of that bar."

Throne = a seat for a king's buttocks. noun. "I have killed Ragnar and taken his throne."

COME ON PEOPLE!