Congratulations are in order; you're now an official member of the Literotica Loving Wives Category "Torch The Bitch" Club. Whether anyone cares is more due to your sterile plot than anything else.
Enough already! Why are the scores so good for this perverted mind fuck? What does that say about the readers of this site?
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Anonymous08/01/12
really good...very puzzled that people think its sick...
This is a bdsm story....as far as it bring hardcore...its in the middle. I've read much worse things but I've also read much more vanilla things. I think most people are missing the point that Kelli LIKES it...she likes the abuse and humiliation. She isn't his prisoner, she's his wife and she likes bring degraded and used. At the end of this all I predict they will continue on like this and she'll be happier then ever. Good story do far!!!
While this is a BDSM story, the premise is on redemption, not actual BDSM submission where fantasies and limits are discussed. In keeping with that premise, this story goes too far. Humiliation? OK. But forced public humiliation multiple times? A little too far to get even. Please restrian yourself.
English
Yawn
Congratulations are in order; you're now an official member of the Literotica Loving Wives Category "Torch The Bitch" Club. Whether anyone cares is more due to your sterile plot than anything else.
Sick Shit
Enough already! Why are the scores so good for this perverted mind fuck? What does that say about the readers of this site?
really good...very puzzled that people think its sick...
This is a bdsm story....as far as it bring hardcore...its in the middle. I've read much worse things but I've also read much more vanilla things. I think most people are missing the point that Kelli LIKES it...she likes the abuse and humiliation. She isn't his prisoner, she's his wife and she likes bring degraded and used. At the end of this all I predict they will continue on like this and she'll be happier then ever. Good story do far!!!
Actually...
While this is a BDSM story, the premise is on redemption, not actual BDSM submission where fantasies and limits are discussed. In keeping with that premise, this story goes too far. Humiliation? OK. But forced public humiliation multiple times? A little too far to get even. Please restrian yourself.
You are sick.
You have gone from writing about a man seeking revenge for an affair to devolving into a twisted demon reveling in the degradation of women.
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