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LOOKS MAY CHANGE
but people still remain the same. Inside and out. TK U MLJ LV NV
It's a good start
A good fast paced and smooth reading story, with a little humor to it. I like the storyline so far, but it will probably turn a little dark before the end, with the main character getting fucked over.
I'll be watching for the next chapter.
Thanks for the read.
A Nice " Little" Read
In terms of what's there - bravo! I'm not against the installment method but one measly page is peeving . A groove had been established then without warning ; nada. I am looking forward to author's next submission and hope that in terms of chapters, " double up and catchup "is the motto going forward .
We Know
We know your habit of ruining marriages with children.
It looks like you're setting this up for her to get tipsy with her girlfriends one night, meet up with T and/or someone else, rediscover her insatiable sex drive and start a life of adultery.
Anyway, I liked the set up so yes, I'll keep reading.
Nice story
Nice story, not so nice characters. Chris is a constant womanizer but does not use protection with his latest conquest. What a prince! Mr. T, the wimp formerly known as Bully Roberts, is being set up to try his hand at revenge down the line.
Please save this story from formula boredom!
if
if his "predicament" refers to Debbie taking it up with T again, then "This is it" probably refers to the end of the rope, if not the end of their marriage. Does she have to make a decision or is his decision already made, just bring the rest asap. The writing is good and the cutting point just left us hanging and made us curious enough to want to read the rest, although I would have preferred to see more right now.
Nice Moving Story
In fact, I found myself ten feet off the cliff before I stopped reading. The introduction was nicely detailed and we do not have a time reference so the fuckfest could have occurred in 1970 with everyone on the pill.
Sound like he got
off easy for raping her. Yes in most countries a drunk person can not give consent. So he should get all that is coming to him. What a bastard he is.
a bit predictable
an asshole of a bully, an airhead and not much of a woman (character).
good writing, short chapter and .....
Comments
Is there an easy way to read the comments before reading the story? I could have saved myself from this pile of silliness.
Good start
I enjoyed The House Husband. Looking forward to this tale.
What is it about Scotland?...
...even the sex seems more like a bad scrum but I have just got to get me one of those comment generators like bigdaddybitch that spew out totally random and completely irrelevant comments like the one he made above intimating that he did not really read this ponderous preamble.
a start, average reader here, could get boring but enough out there to tantalize a bit
1lnbrdg here, a start, enough to tickle my interest, when are the rest out? bury the b*#*ch I'd say but who am I? Waiting for the next installment to see if it's worth continuation . . . . . . .
Intriguing
Intriguing plot so far, look forward to chapter two. I liked his attitude of not to worry until there was something to worry about. Ha!
Is it?
Oh goody another Loving Wives chapterizer. Oh we fortunate readers waiting with thitchy wi-fi connections for the next exciting chapter. This better be fucking good or you'll roast in the fires of reader ire.
Different!!
Good read waiting for part two.
I Like It
Give us several more quick chapters.
Wow hard sell
You certainly do attract a tough audience, I can see them now twiddling feverishly with their stiletto knives desperate to have some excuse to use them and that's even before the story has really got going.
IN THE OLD DAYS
"IT" CAUSED A LOT OF MISCHIEF, tk u mlj lv nv
Interesting beginning
One thing we know right off the bat. Both Chris and Debbie are cheaters of the worst kind. Continue...
Enjoyed it
Interesting storyline. Thanks for the offering.
karma?
About to get the treatment served back for all those married chicks you fucked
And who the he'll is Irene. Thought it was Andy & Sarah
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