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Is This It Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by ydderf12/05/11

Thanks, eh

This is some of the better quality writing here ignore the idiots and please keep writing!

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by Huedogg201/02/12

five chapter of I'm a happy cuckold

I smell pussy

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by emotionnmotion02/01/12

uhmm

Sell her to the BUTCHERS...

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by Anonymous02/07/12

Organ donar

Sorry, i missed the chapter, where he donate his brain and balls!

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by Anonymous03/05/12

two cheaters making peace

to bad people do not comunuicate with each other and let them know what is not working for them in there lives and marriage. if they did and trust each other this story would not have happened. some comments on him being a cuckhold it works both ways he cheated first. but some men must feel women are whores and only they can cheat.. pretty sick thinking..i love those sick comments from guys who say kill the bitch. they want women to ware a dog collar

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by spyinthesky04/04/12

Delusion

It seems around a third of wives cheat on their husbands making them cuckolds but I think that many of the critics here are either too mentally retarded to have a relationship at all or are so smug they have no idea that their wives are very likely to have put it out elsewhere.

Know a guy for some years who only knew his wife was cucking him (some 2 years earlier) when a friend (a fellow salesman) brought up his wife after a few drinks on the road and after some seemingly suggestive comments was given the impression the husband knew what had happened between them and this guy then told him how he and his wife had had an ongoing affair and the details in technicolor. Subsequently he found out from this guy she had been seeing someone else too and yet he knew nothing of it.

He never let on about it to his wife and indeed became so aroused at the idea of his 'conservative' wife cheating and managing to do this without once letting it out of the bag has subsequently started to encourage the idea though without doing the deed as yet.

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by Anonymous04/23/12

Too much direspect

Yes he cheated discretly. She might as well have put her infidelity on 60 minutes. You hazve people taking photos of her on her knees sucking off T. Then she plays with T at a public party. Who inthat town is ever going to respect him for taking her back. The children will hear about their mother from their classmates. This is a recipet for disaster. He's a chump. And I am not a "burn the bitch" kind of guy.

Husband = idiot.

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by RePhil07/04/12

Wow. Castrated and can still make full sentences

Sometimes these "men" just need roll over and die! And us real men will take their women. Yeh for T!

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by chilleywilley09/29/12

great story

I liked it (and most of your other work). She was an odd duck, and frankly so was he, willing to settle for a love less relationship. Still it was their choice.
The reconciliation should have been more difficult that it was, but it was the end of the story, and there was little need to drag it out. Perhaps the moral of the story is find out what each others kinks are, and find a way to satisfy them. If there was a sequel, they would be happy swingers, publicly fucking each other, and others.
We should feel sorry for people who need others to validate their moral choices.

Chilley

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by ythebadger10/06/12

The midden

that you mentioned in Ch 01 - and euphemistically called a 'back yard' - is the place where this marriage is headed.

NB For those who who don't know a 'midden' is defined as "a dunghill or refuse heap."

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by tazz31711/23/12

CONFESSION IS GOOD FOR THE SOUL

its also fodder for the divorce court, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by betrayedbylove11/26/12

Just Fair

This series leaves a lot of unanswered questions. But in the end the cheaters deserved each other. Funny, though, she never did say "I love you" to him.
She'll fuck T again and he'll fuck around again himself. A cheaters a cheater.

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Sorry

Happy endings don't come from a story like this...Once a cheater always a cheater.

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by Anonymous01/21/13

Typical gutless Brit wimp.

They all seem to be like this. Damn worthless nation. "1" !

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by norcal6205/23/13

Funny that someone would call him a gutless wimp.

How about he's an adulterous husband?

In this tale it's two far from perfect spouses.

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by monkcalm06/08/13

hunnngh 1

Personally i would have decked my father and told him to fuck off, fucking wimp bitch,all those words again wasted, but you still have a strong cuckold(women) following, and once again the crying women crutch and kids waaaaa waaaa - come back for them- it sad but the marriage rate is falling because this shit happens and men now dont like ,trust, or respect women because they are like this cunt more often than not and parent of men(abandoned wife,signal moms,men see why dad left) support the women.

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by firas0107/02/13

I hate it when authors do this

through all the four chapters the author was signaling that this man will do the right thing, and then here we see him as no more then a wimp, his wife treat him like shit after the child is born, no sex, no affections, and no I love you through out their whole marriage, and she publicly disgrace him not only the first time but more then once after that, and all that is forgiven because he was driven to cheat a couple of times for the lack of sex and passion at home, one star.

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by firas0107/02/13

BTW

this is the first and the LAST story that i will read for this author.

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by phil221308/16/13

Not very good content but nicely written.

This is a screwed up mess that was extremely unpleasant to read.

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by Cybawulf08/19/13

Wimp.

Ruined by the wimp going back to her, garbage

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by Anonymous10/13/13

the dumbest fuck

sorry excuse for a man

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by Drbeamer333311/05/13

Enjoyed it

But did she ever say that she loved him?

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by Charley49er11/12/13

If you are going to reconcile

them, at least lay a better foundation. Her actions were evil. He was a cheater, but was discreet and while not a justification, sex every 6 weeks was inexcusable. Her unwillingness to SAY she love him - regardless of the song - showed she was not ready to make a real full commitment. There needed at least some counseling, and some attempt to slowly regain the relationship. I think in the end she even hinted that she needed him to be there for the kids - to take some of the work off of her? She is very selfish and arrogant vis a vis her mother. He would ultimately be better off with a woman who was not afraid to love him.

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by Anonymous08/26/14

All your stories end flat

He takes her back , why? For the kids sake. The ending was never finished properly.

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by fifteen1610/05/14

Just a Story

Just a story but people do the strangest things sometimes, lack of communication thus not expressing concerns and worries about the day to day thoughts and misgivings, there is probably more reality to this story than we may think. Marriage because of pregnancy, interfering mother in law, old boy friend on the scene, husband not getting enough therefore taking the occasional quickie, ring any bells folks? Good story I thought, well done.

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by KarenE10/21/14

Bleach!

D-I-V-O-R-C-E!

Her excuse for New Year's Eve is BS!

Her excuse is she was drunk?

But she KNOWS how she gets when she drinks, that's why she DOESN'T drink!

So her drinking was deliberate, knowing what could/would ensue.

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by Parttimereader10/22/14

karene logic

She should divorce him for his affairs. But not putting out must make it ok so she is totally to blame and he can act self righteously. Please!!

You do need to find an editor though lines like

She sat down on the couch and went upstairs to pack a bag

Need proof reading

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by chilleywilley10/31/14

You cut it short at the end

So him hearing about the new year fuck fest, and "I love you" was all it took? Nah! She has to talk about being t's slut and about life going forward

I gave the series 5's because it was good writing

Chilley

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by rick_oh11/06/14

Kind of disappointing

In that there were no cinditions for reconciliation. In my view, Debbie should do some "penance" and her husband should tell her that he WILL leave is she so much as talks to T.

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by Anonymous11/18/14

Well

Having read the other chapters, I now understand why this chapter rated so poorly compared to the others.

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by SyrustheVirus11/28/14

Wow...... You really ruined did it.... I didn't think you would actually want to destroy all your hard work but you did....

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by lance_spearman01/22/15

If we are to believe the ending

it is utterly irrational for HIM to forgive Debbie for her behaviour, because he was the one who wandered first.

I can see this as the basis for a good story - revenge sex for the wrong reason - but this isn't that story.

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by wonder20301/27/15

Well written

But the ending is totally out of the realm with him in the story. Up until then the story was great.

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by xtchr02/03/15

Can't Accept It!

This guy is really something.
1) She told him from the beginning that she didn't love him.
2) In all of the 13 years, she never said she loved him.
3) Sex maybe once a month - from a supposedly highly-sexed woman.
4) Acting like a slut at party.
5) Completely humiliating him at Party with ex-boyfriend.
6) Doing things with ex-boyfriend that she never did with husband.
I guess you could go on and on with reasons.
KarenE said it best "D.I.V.O.R.C.E."

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by rick_oh05/14/15

How about an alternate ending

In which he does not come home until she fixes things to his satisfaction. Maybe it would be her publicly humiliating T, (and all who participated in seting him up), and publicly admitting she believed faked evidence. When she fixes things, then he considers coming home.

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by Anonymous07/14/15

Too lazy

There would have to be a LOT of discussion and apology from her before he would even consider reconciliation. A three month affair that continued after he left against some one night stands when she deprived him of sex. Not comparable! She was a bitch for years, a slut for months and disrespected him.

This was a lazy ending. If the betrayal is serious, which this most certainly was then you have to work very hard to justify reconciliation. This was not the case in this story. I am not against reconciliation but the remorse and the restitution must reflect the degree of betrayal and this certainly did not. So don't stop writing of reconciliation but do it in a credible way please.

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by Tim41341308/05/15

Since Debbie

had never blown him, I must assume she had never given him her ass. And allowing T to continue their sexcapades while hubby walked in was also over the top. Sorry, fawguy88, you did not convince me. Disliked the ending.

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by Anonymous01/08/16

I support reconciliation but..

It has to be well written and this wasn't. It just left a bad taste in the mouth. It was as if the author couldn't be bothered to write another Chapter. In any event he had dug the hole too deep. It started with refusing to say she loved him then moved on to encouraging a stranger feel her tits, then to neglect for years, cheating for months, disrespect and open betrayal at the party, treacherous connivance with her mother and the continued open betrayal after he walked out.

How could one line from a song and a few half hearted apologies compensate for all that. And to add insult to injury he then blames himself for causing her so much pain! Really. Rewrite that last Chapter or add another that makes sense author.

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by telboy1704/10/16

This is what it is

Some facts for all you misogynistic BtB's out there who are blaming her and excusing him.

He was a cheatee with married women before they got together.
He cheated on her well before she did and with a lot more women during their marriage. He may have had poor reasons, but as BtB lovers comment on other stories when women cheat - there is no excuse to cheat.
She knew he was having "dalliances" (her words) so the doctored photos would be easy to believe.

As they both were blameworthy I think RAAC was a good ending. I do agree that T should have been punished.

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by maninconn09/24/16

Grea series!

Abrupt wrap up? The first four were masterpieces. This one, not so much.

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by TMSPTGR310/19/16

Major Crap

There is no possible justification for your ending. As paper, not even worthy of the outhouse.

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by Anonymous12/22/16

****WARNING**** ..... "CUCK/RAAC" wannabe Writer!!!

YOU were warned .... NOW YOU PAY! Delete all you want .... it will not end ....

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