Hailey's Panties Spark a Fantasy

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too much fantasy-reality-fantasy , hard to follow. gave U a 1 outa 5 because of that.

really? i have no idea how you couldnt follow it, i just read it and found no problems reading it, maybe you just didnt pay much atention

great story. one of the most interesting i've read so far! hope to see more soon

hm, never realized it may be hard to follow, ill keep that in mind and look over my next story a few more times to make sure, thanks for the feedback

A pretty good start

Hailey tries to play innocent but knows a lot about teasing and controlling her Dad. Story can go in many directions. keep writing you gave good ideas.

it's a good start, can't wait for more

it's a good start, can't wait for more

WTF?

"Today is the last day of work before summer starts and I finally have a break from work.

As you may have guessed I work as a professor."

What the fuck?

Regardless of all previous comments, this was all downhill from here. Reads like it was written by a 17yo - which I imagine it was.

Might spice things up

I think u should n hailey should have sex two of her friends should catch you then you let them join. Both are 36c your wife goes on her trip finds you hailey and one of her friends having sex and finds out she is more turned on the ever and joins the mix, but that's just me.