All Comments on 'One Shot Ch. 02'

love it

it coming :-)

I love your stories

Wow it was so hot the way the came together and what a suspence in the end but... they know there in love and made love and they still don´t know there last name jijiji

I absolutely love your story so far! Now, I could sit here and grouch about how grammatically incorrect your story was at times, and how an editor could help with that, but instead I'm just going to say great job and keep it up. I can't wait for the next installment! :D

Glad to see this up! Have to say Daddy is a determined sicko, lol.

about the editor thing. But is was a great read and I would love to read the rest.

Am so glad that Justin opened up to Garrick and can't wait to read more...

How could you end it like that? When is the next chapter gonna be up, if ever. I will be sorely disapointed if it never came. Wahhhh!!!

another cliffhanger....

Deamon Child...

my seal, the eclipse...

I need to know what happens!! Desperately need to know! Please?!!! Loving this story, keep writing!

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Give us more soon, please!

Can't leave us hanging like this....lol

So frustrating starting a story and it not being finished

Very nice. Eager for more.

Please write more its so good u cant stop now

please continue......

Please let Garrick heal Justin's soul and prorect him from the evil haunting him... hoping for more.