SIW: Adam & Bronwille Ch. 02

Wow...you said it'd be hard and you weren't joking. Poor Bron :( I hope Adam can find who did this and spend a few months ripping them into tiny little pieces.

oh wow!

To go through all that and find the strength to live shows what an amazing woman Bron is. I can't wait to see if Adam finds the bastards! Your stories are amazing!

dam

excellent written the story is very hard to read and i hope you have decided to let adam have a few pleasent minutes with the piece of shit that did it to her and of course the rest of his friends should get similiar time with Adam's wolf

can not wait for the next chapter

My Gryphon is rooting for Adam's wolf.

But I think Adam should tell Bron his story as a 'fiction', it would help her, I think...

and breath.....

Wow!! This story is absolutely breathtaking.... the collaboration with the other authors adds depth and character to whom Bron is. I have faith that Adam will prevail but I have a hunch that we'd better buckle down and prepare for a wild ride..

Wicked!!

Painful and yet I had to read it all. Please give the wolf a go at the assholes!!! Dw

another great chapter!

I love the fact that three of my fav authors are coming together into one story this is great! I think Adam is going to be so broken down after reading Brons story he is not going to know which way is up. I hope that at some time he is able to find the men and the woman that did this to her and tortures them just the way they did to her. Will Bron begin to come out looking for adam if he no longer comes around and calls her or to see her? She wants and needs that contact with him it seems but if he stops will she start to seek him out? I cant wiat to see what his writing will bring and how she will react to it!

loving it!!

Another great chapter for Adam. I love how both Cedar and Jaz are writing stories in your story. You picked some fabulous writers to cover that area. I'm sure you could've done it but having others do it makes them stories on there own and gives them each their own unique feel to them.

Bravo to all three of you!!

Please

Tell me that Adam's wolf finds these guys!

Another interesting chapter

look forward to the next.

awsome chapter

and awesome collabaration from the members of the guild. It is an honor that I was chosen to proofread this story. All of the members of the guild are supreme writers on their own and to have them all submit a bit to a series makes it all the better. But, Mokkelke is a fantabulous author on her own. In any case, any mistakes in the grammar, spelling and punctuation are all my fault and not of the authors. hugs to all

Incredible!

This story is so amazing .... Loving the additions from the other writers...

OMG

That was so hard to read. I just hope Adam will get justice for her and soon. That I will have no problems reading.

Sherrylee1015

Revenge and fast please!!!

I relly like your stories but I have to demand that in the next chapter Adam can take his revenge on each and any of the men that raped and tortoured her as well as Kathy, who would deserve to be tortoured as well for helping Ruben and the others. Simply disgusting and it gave me not much joy reading the rest of the chapter.
If there is not very soon the revenge to look forward you will lose me as your reader because it just feels there has to be som justice done and I will not allow myself to be in a constant feeling of fury so better to read altogether if you can´t come up very soon with the next chapter and the release for your other reader´s anger, as I am shure they are experiencing it just as I do.

Vengance will be Sweet

I know I'm not the only one waiting for those bastards' demise. When it happens....OOH! That's gonna be good. Keep up the good work!

C.C

Took me a while.....,

Wow that was a tough read I had to take a few breaks to get through it. Fiction or not poor Bron. I know two wrongs don't make a right, but please unleash Adam or better yet, Bron in rabid wolf form. That said, the collaboration between the three of you was brilliant in between cringing, I kept rereading Jaz's 'story'. Now I'm hoping the rest of it will pop up somewhere one of these days(hint hint). Excellent as usual.

Hard

this has been really hard to read. Almost like Adam I want to know more but the more I know the angrier I get. Knowing you I know it gets better, it's the getting to the better part that keeps me reading on.

This is so sad!!!!!! Just thinking about someone in life going through this.....screaming right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

difficult to read...

her part of the story is so difficult to read, I hope (like others have commented) that there is some MAJOR revenge but also healing that will take place!

speechless....

I have read all of your works on the SIW up to this point and everything Jazz has written here on lit and her blog and facebook...lol...(ok that sounded kinda stalkerish...lol) anyway, loved the collaboration with her inserted short tale....but I must say the B&B story is heartbreaking, I really am hoping and looking forward to seeing Adam and Bron work this through together....I love your work and hope you don't stop writing and thank you for your editing/proofing skills you lend to Jazz too...I am so glad I found LIT and look forward to more stories that are as captivating as these.

PS if you have a blog or facebook that you post other works too I would love to read them. :)