All Comments on 'The Annual Christmas Party Ch. 01'

That is not a story, may a start and not a very good one

At the start of this story, you say: "This is a continuation from Lust: In the beginning. All events happen years after that story. It makes more sense if you read that first and then move on to this."

This may be difficult, since The Annual Christmas Party Ch. 01 is the only story listed on your author page. Since you say that "{This story} makes more sense if you read that {Lust: In the beginning} first and then move on to this," I've passed on this story until I can read "Lust: etc", and then will come back to it if I even remember this idiocy in the first place.

This certainly not the way to win fans - refer them to a non-existant predecessor story to read before they read this one.

How do I comment on nothing?

Keep going...or quit now while you're ahead. You might want to try writing something a little longer than a notes worth!

MAJOR FAIL

MOTHERFUCKER74

Reads like an author who started a story then gave up. And I don't blame him.

The story started getting hot, why did you stop? I could really help you out with this if you want me to. Very interesting!

This reads like it was written by a twelve year-old. The command of grammar and syntax is non-existent.

Hope you didn't get carpal tunnel writing this postcard

But it did set up the story premise for the next chapter. I'll wait to see whats in store for the christmas party.

Thanks for the start.

Nice idea, but too many errors in this story, and too short.

Read up on the difference between "there" and "their".

As short as it was I didn't waste too much time reading it.

wtf is lust, the story of which this is the continuation?

sorry, but you can't ask us to read what is not there.

and, what you posted wasn't even a partial page.