Sometimes it's just nice to read a good story. With or without sex. This one is a good story. Would like to read the next chapter or two.
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Anonymous09/15/11
A good start, but then
I liked your story summer knight, but this one is just wrong! The first problem is with the name of your second story. On a site like this, where it takes days, or longer to put out a second chapter to a story you do not go changing the name, while keeping all the characters the same. This story should have been called Summer Knight chapter 2. That way people who enjoyed your first posting can easily follow the series. Next you have a woman who just recently started having sex, and is gang raped by none other than her two brothers, and all it takes is a single night before she's back to having sex with her boyfriend, like nothing ever happened. Can anybody say the word traumatized? There were a lot of ways you could have come up with to get her to quit her brothers band. This shouldn't have been one of them, at least that is my opinion.
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Continue with it but don't make an encyclopedia of it. There is nothing as boring as reading a story for 2 years or more.
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Sometimes it's just nice to read a good story. With or without sex. This one is a good story. Would like to read the next chapter or two.
A good start, but then
I liked your story summer knight, but this one is just wrong! The first problem is with the name of your second story. On a site like this, where it takes days, or longer to put out a second chapter to a story you do not go changing the name, while keeping all the characters the same. This story should have been called Summer Knight chapter 2. That way people who enjoyed your first posting can easily follow the series. Next you have a woman who just recently started having sex, and is gang raped by none other than her two brothers, and all it takes is a single night before she's back to having sex with her boyfriend, like nothing ever happened. Can anybody say the word traumatized? There were a lot of ways you could have come up with to get her to quit her brothers band. This shouldn't have been one of them, at least that is my opinion.
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