Talk of the Town!

Why

didn't I think of that!

REVENGE FOR DUMMIES

You truly should write this book! You know the ones with the yellow covers! LOL

Double D is one vindictive dude!

I always enjoy his snapshots of revenge and retribution and his efforts to find different ways to achieve his goal.

BACK STREET GOSSIP

is always provocative and rarely beneficial. This tale rates a sequel. TK U MLJ LV NV

as erotic as screwing my grandma

I think baseball stats would get me off faster.

Take a story

change a few words and names, rub off the serial number and reprint it as new. Nice try but it will not fly.

Man. Are you some criminal or mentally unsound guy in disguise? God save your wife.Poor woman.She must be repenting the day she married you.

Fun

Fun revenge, i'm pretty sure u your character administered the truth serium drug that is likely unattainable by joe average instead of a sleeping agent.

Just a plain sick asshole author.

Yep, just a sicko idiot.

A very convoluted scheme

He went to a lot of work to get rid of her. He would have been better off if he just tossed her ass out. The end result would have been the same.

liked it

Pretty nice to see the cheaters punished so well.

Fun

I was amused.

Enjoyed It.

Thanks.

The premise I liked, but some of those images that were a part of the plan? Too complicated, but nice to think how they would regret their past and to live with the present and future.

Good Story

They really turned it around... Interesting enough sodium pentothal is used in executions in the USA and most of the worlds chemical companies have stopped manufacturing it. So anyone wanting to imitate will have problems and they better get the dosage right!

Five Stars!

Excellent, just excellent!

Is there more?

Is there more? There should be because it seems unfinished to me.

Lovely

Ha ha!! Love this... too funny!

Bit complicated, but ...

I liked the idea and can see my wife in this. Poor dear she has already had her share of head hanging. More would be good though ...

An interesting idea for a story

But it was marred by very clunky wording.

Would work

in India maybe. Still a stupid fantasy, cuck.

How About

The Fallout will you write another Chapter and Describe the Fallout and do the Wronged Parties get together or just Say thanks and go on with their Lives?

I trust

There will be a second part. To end it like this would be a disservice to the characters, and your readers. "The Fallout" is an excellent title by the way.

Why would anyone want this poorly written story continued?

Lack of editing, mixed up construction make it less than interesting.

Sequel, no sequel

I am very happy with the way this story ends. Is it written by somebody whose primary language is English? Since the author is from India, I very much doubt it. Does that detract from the story? No. The world does not revolve around the English language. Was the story complete? Yes. Life goes on. The only way that there is an end to this is for all participants to die and everybody else who saw the pictures and emails to die. Since that did not happen the story is complete as is. I vote no sequel.

Now for all of you out the in cyber space, who are such great authors, get busy and write your own sequels, if you can't or wont then please do us a favor and just disappear. Your comments are duly noted.

Life is life, a story is just that a story. A story posted on this or other internet site is just a story. A real person's imaginations, or creative ability, nothing more. GET A LIFE! You can be the man or woman you want to be in real life or you can show us how you wished that you really were as against how you really are. Think about it.

lol!

the only thing that could have made that story any better. would be after everything calms down and starts going back to normal for the two cheaters. release a couple more pics to everyone and start the shit up all over again..... hahahahaha

Chapter 2 please

And thank you

DOES PARTIAL PAYBACK COUNT

towards the cheaters. TK U MLJ LV NV

Excellent.

I love your work for many reasons. For starters it's too the point and does not go on and on for many pages. Furthermore Revenge extracted in your stories is kick-ass and that I believe is abn important ingreident for a loving wives category or a "cheating" story. I hate it when the husband becomes a wimp & forgives the wife. I have as much heart as the next guy on the planet but in a cheating case somehow expecting forgiveness is not justified.

typos by me

saw a few spelling mistakes in my comment and that was bad. Moral of the story I need to check when i type super fast before submitting my comment. :(

Short!!

But a good read. Thanks for sharing.

good story

but you need to rethink your endings. well written i like yo style.

A different Approach

Well well. Humiliate the cheating couple by portraying them not only as cheaters but as deviants as well. Thet just thought they were fucking but a very different image of their follies was being portrayed to everyone else.

HA

ITS DELIGHTFUL WHEN A PLAN

comes to fruition and the payback/revenge is complete, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well? How did it go?

I just ran across this short story. You really need to write chapter 2

I Agree

with Anonymous How did it go and Did Rita and Nelles hubby get together as the Grieving Divorcees . Or did they just go about finding a New Lover and stay Friends.

how did it go? it went however your mind wants it to go, but badly for the wife and cheating husband, enough said.

Master of Revenge

You may be the master of the revenge story. While the tactics may not always be 100% believable, they do inspire the imagination!

REVENGE FOR DUMMIES

Is a good idea, you got some strange shit in your head, please keep sharing....5

Great idea RePhil

bill

OH YEAH

The cheaters wanted something on the side? They got it. And everyone knows. And everyone LAUGHS AT THEM IN THEIR PERVERSION. Ha Ha.
This tale would make a good short comedy porno. Write the screenplay, I'm sure many will watch.

Ha again.

#2 THE SCHOOL OF HARD KNOCKS IS EZ

compared to the magnitude of public opinion. TK U MLJ LV NV

A chapter 2 would be fun -

But it is not necessary - my mind can come up with numerous endings all fun for him not for them -

Even one where he keeps her but as a clear and obvious Sub to him so he "looks" like the big bad he man LOL. I might lead to a good long term relationship but the trust would never likely return so why bother -

Remarkable Twist

Definitely the product of a deliciously evil and twisted mind!!! 5*

As Jafar told lago

I love the way your foul little mind works.

This could have been in Humor & Satire!

I laughed all the way through. ROFL

5 HUGE Stars!

A good story...

A good story and funny too...

Cute, but

could have used proofreading/editing. DD wrote one story in '13 and none so far in '14. I hope she returns to Lit.

Original!

Like all good stories, I wanted it to keep going and not end. The cheaters got theirs in a very original way. It didn't need to be any longer, but I wish it was. Thanks for a very original story.

HA

I guess if you catch your spouse cheating it's ok to make an absolute fool, laughing stock out of them for all time.

Don't cheat. Only stupid people cheat. Ask Ashley Madison

OH YEAH

Truth is often worse than fiction

The truth of why people cheat is often worse than making up a story about them. Pure selfishness, the desire of a little person to feel power by getting over on another person - their spouse, fucking as networking (whoring), pathetically low self esteem - all of these "reasons" are more embarrassing than a little sexual perversion. The truth is also THE TRUTH! Everybody deserves it, no one deserves a lie. We only go around once, there is no time for lies.