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nakdsubnakdsubover 12 years ago
Why

didn't I think of that!

RePhilRePhilover 12 years ago
REVENGE FOR DUMMIES

You truly should write this book! You know the ones with the yellow covers! LOL

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 12 years ago
Double D is one vindictive dude!

I always enjoy his snapshots of revenge and retribution and his efforts to find different ways to achieve his goal.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
BACK STREET GOSSIP

is always provocative and rarely beneficial. This tale rates a sequel. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
as erotic as screwing my grandma

I think baseball stats would get me off faster.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Take a story

change a few words and names, rub off the serial number and reprint it as new. Nice try but it will not fly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Man. Are you some criminal or mentally unsound guy in disguise? God save your wife.Poor woman.She must be repenting the day she married you.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 12 years ago
Fun

Fun revenge, i'm pretty sure u your character administered the truth serium drug that is likely unattainable by joe average instead of a sleeping agent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just a plain sick asshole author.

Yep, just a sicko idiot.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
A very convoluted scheme

He went to a lot of work to get rid of her. He would have been better off if he just tossed her ass out. The end result would have been the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
liked it

Pretty nice to see the cheaters punished so well.

RHinSCRHinSCover 12 years ago
Fun

I was amused.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

The premise I liked, but some of those images that were a part of the plan? Too complicated, but nice to think how they would regret their past and to live with the present and future.

bruce22bruce22over 12 years ago
Good Story

They really turned it around... Interesting enough sodium pentothal is used in executions in the USA and most of the worlds chemical companies have stopped manufacturing it. So anyone wanting to imitate will have problems and they better get the dosage right!

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
Five Stars!

Excellent, just excellent!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Is there more?

Is there more? There should be because it seems unfinished to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lovely

Ha ha!! Love this... too funny!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bit complicated, but ...

I liked the idea and can see my wife in this. Poor dear she has already had her share of head hanging. More would be good though ...

FD45FD45over 12 years ago
An interesting idea for a story

But it was marred by very clunky wording.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Would work

in India maybe. Still a stupid fantasy, cuck.

C_frommnC_frommnover 12 years ago
How About

The Fallout will you write another Chapter and Describe the Fallout and do the Wronged Parties get together or just Say thanks and go on with their Lives?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I trust

There will be a second part. To end it like this would be a disservice to the characters, and your readers. "The Fallout" is an excellent title by the way.

norcal62norcal62over 12 years ago
Why would anyone want this poorly written story continued?

Lack of editing, mixed up construction make it less than interesting.

gnfgnfover 12 years ago
Sequel, no sequel

I am very happy with the way this story ends. Is it written by somebody whose primary language is English? Since the author is from India, I very much doubt it. Does that detract from the story? No. The world does not revolve around the English language. Was the story complete? Yes. Life goes on. The only way that there is an end to this is for all participants to die and everybody else who saw the pictures and emails to die. Since that did not happen the story is complete as is. I vote no sequel.

Now for all of you out the in cyber space, who are such great authors, get busy and write your own sequels, if you can't or wont then please do us a favor and just disappear. Your comments are duly noted.

Life is life, a story is just that a story. A story posted on this or other internet site is just a story. A real person's imaginations, or creative ability, nothing more. GET A LIFE! You can be the man or woman you want to be in real life or you can show us how you wished that you really were as against how you really are. Think about it.

TechRaiderTechRaiderover 12 years ago
lol!

the only thing that could have made that story any better. would be after everything calms down and starts going back to normal for the two cheaters. release a couple more pics to everyone and start the shit up all over again..... hahahahaha

RePhilRePhilabout 12 years ago
Chapter 2 please

And thank you

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
DOES PARTIAL PAYBACK COUNT

towards the cheaters. TK U MLJ LV NV

karan9876karan9876about 12 years ago
Excellent.

I love your work for many reasons. For starters it's too the point and does not go on and on for many pages. Furthermore Revenge extracted in your stories is kick-ass and that I believe is abn important ingreident for a loving wives category or a "cheating" story. I hate it when the husband becomes a wimp & forgives the wife. I have as much heart as the next guy on the planet but in a cheating case somehow expecting forgiveness is not justified.

karan9876karan9876about 12 years ago
typos by me

saw a few spelling mistakes in my comment and that was bad. Moral of the story I need to check when i type super fast before submitting my comment. :(

chytownchytownabout 12 years ago
Short!!

But a good read. Thanks for sharing.

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 12 years ago
good story

but you need to rethink your endings. well written i like yo style.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 12 years ago
A different Approach

Well well. Humiliate the cheating couple by portraying them not only as cheaters but as deviants as well. Thet just thought they were fucking but a very different image of their follies was being portrayed to everyone else.

HA

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
ITS DELIGHTFUL WHEN A PLAN

comes to fruition and the payback/revenge is complete, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well? How did it go?

I just ran across this short story. You really need to write chapter 2

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 11 years ago
I Agree

with Anonymous How did it go and Did Rita and Nelles hubby get together as the Grieving Divorcees . Or did they just go about finding a New Lover and stay Friends.

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 11 years ago

how did it go? it went however your mind wants it to go, but badly for the wife and cheating husband, enough said.

sugnasugnaover 10 years ago
Master of Revenge

You may be the master of the revenge story. While the tactics may not always be 100% believable, they do inspire the imagination!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
REVENGE FOR DUMMIES

Is a good idea, you got some strange shit in your head, please keep sharing....5

Great idea RePhil

bill

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
OH YEAH

The cheaters wanted something on the side? They got it. And everyone knows. And everyone LAUGHS AT THEM IN THEIR PERVERSION. Ha Ha.

This tale would make a good short comedy porno. Write the screenplay, I'm sure many will watch.

Ha again.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
#2 THE SCHOOL OF HARD KNOCKS IS EZ

compared to the magnitude of public opinion. TK U MLJ LV NV

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
A chapter 2 would be fun -

But it is not necessary - my mind can come up with numerous endings all fun for him not for them -

Even one where he keeps her but as a clear and obvious Sub to him so he "looks" like the big bad he man LOL. I might lead to a good long term relationship but the trust would never likely return so why bother -

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3about 10 years ago
Remarkable Twist

Definitely the product of a deliciously evil and twisted mind!!! 5*

semofuncpl3semofuncpl3about 10 years ago
As Jafar told lago

I love the way your foul little mind works.

IronDragonIronDragonabout 10 years ago
This could have been in Humor & Satire!

I laughed all the way through. ROFL

5 HUGE Stars!

impo_58impo_58almost 10 years ago
A good story...

A good story and funny too...

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
Cute, but

could have used proofreading/editing. DD wrote one story in '13 and none so far in '14. I hope she returns to Lit.

xtchrxtchrabout 9 years ago
Original!

Like all good stories, I wanted it to keep going and not end. The cheaters got theirs in a very original way. It didn't need to be any longer, but I wish it was. Thanks for a very original story.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 8 years ago
HA

I guess if you catch your spouse cheating it's ok to make an absolute fool, laughing stock out of them for all time.

Don't cheat. Only stupid people cheat. Ask Ashley Madison

OH YEAH

sugnasugnaover 8 years ago
Truth is often worse than fiction

The truth of why people cheat is often worse than making up a story about them. Pure selfishness, the desire of a little person to feel power by getting over on another person - their spouse, fucking as networking (whoring), pathetically low self esteem - all of these "reasons" are more embarrassing than a little sexual perversion. The truth is also THE TRUTH! Everybody deserves it, no one deserves a lie. We only go around once, there is no time for lies.

c24jc24jabout 8 years ago
Umm, some assumptions that might work with the less enlightened . . .

Not being willing to experiment does NOT make him look like a man, or the other guy look like a sissy. A few decades ago, a number of men where I worked thought performing oral on a woman was something 'real' men didn't do. They lost out on a lot of fine women, and not only were they not considered real men, they were thought of as prudish and backwards wimps.

A surprising number of the crowd will feel the same way about this husband . . . narrow-minded, missionary sex for babies only prude . . . what she did was wrong, and many will snicker, but many will also think they know why she looked elsewhere.

tazz317tazz317about 8 years ago
ONCE YOU GET BY THE FAMILY

the outside world will give up after 15 minutes of fame. TK U MLJ LV NV

ptolmetptolmetover 6 years ago
Not your best

I like the premis. I think there is a story there that can be fleshed out. Your other stories flow better. They are not as choppy and have fewer grammatical errors. Please keep writing, but this one seems like you called it in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
agree

Flesh it out more.

He take her back? More revenge?

this is a good story, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
REALLY?????

I agree with previous Annoy comment! Stupid and childish!

Oh.....and where the hell did he get Sodium Pentathol????

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 6 years ago
Suspending disbelief

for the sake of the story, it was hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
blackmail email

This story is familiar. I think I liked the one she had to wear the ankle chain and other things to let the world know what a whore she is. And I liked the one where Rick/Richard reclaims his wife with blackmail emails and turns her into a pain slut sub. He goes from disdain to dom in her eyes. That's probably the most erotic story in Loving Wives.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

I like your stories...they are really good and I love allot of your ideas, but, they need to continue on and include the aftermath...also a little more background...Mostly though I would love to find out what happened afterwords.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Revenge

I really enjoyed this, but a second part would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Haha

His great plan is to knock out his wife’s lover, then play with her lover’s dick, and then take photos of her lover’s dick.

Nothing gay about that! Hahaha. I guess the author is trying to tell us something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
UGH!!!!

Childish!

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
And they call him small pecker the home wrecker

Great story I go into other btb's but it definitely works

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Again

This is one of the few cuckold stories that I enjoyed.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Like

I like the way you did that. Humiliation works as well as violence, with less jail time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Masterful!

Masterfully written and cleverly deceptive! Most original way of a cockhold protecting himself from people thinking that he was not man enough to keep his wife happy!

SimpleGuySquaredSimpleGuySquaredover 3 years ago
Heh!!

The usual blow 'em up, shoot 'em up, knock 'em down, bury 'em alive only provides a few moments of resolution, way too quick punishments.

Humiliation, that's the gift that keeps on giving :)

Great story!!

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
One more time

A favorite cuckold story that is always fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good story, bad grammar

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 2 years ago

Oh Yeah

Read this before. That's how you humiliate cheaters. The hell with them.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

1 star - no comment

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not many guys wanna hook up with a pegging Dom. Ouch, good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

written in a dumb sort of way.

1 Star

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

AWESOME revenge. Super idea of the strapon and shrunken penis email wording, LOL. Also, all the words that Websters Dictionary wouldn't print

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome btb, a part 2 would of been amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I find myself mystified by the recurring theme in LW that everybody laughs at a man whose wife has cheated on him and they all assume that the reason she has done so is because he isn't getting the job done in the bedroom. While I have no doubt that such people do exist, I can't imagine why anyone would give a flying fuck about their worthless opinions. If I had been cuckolded these idiots would be the least of my worries.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 1 year ago

they layeth the smack down on their candy asses.......if you smell what dangerouslydead is cooking

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nicely done. Writer constructed a humiliation plan that beats any form of corporal punishment. Also liked the ending. Most viewers van picture what the husband’s life is next. The fact that the victims could enact this action demonstrated that they will be supported and fine.

inka2222inka22229 months ago

@anon - OK, it's a legit query. Explanation is very simple, people LOVE to laugh at other people's misfortune and put other people down. Most people are assholes, at least in part. THIS is why when someone is cheated on, instead of defending the victim, they snipe at the victim. It's standard human behavior, unfortunately. It's FAR FAR worse when the cheating victim is male - in Western society, because man-hating culture won't even give him the benefit of being seen as a victim like they would a woman; in more traditional patriarchal ones, because of various cultural norms too complicated to explain in a small comment.

If you're asking why someone would care about others' opinions... again, see human sociology and psychology. We evolved to (a) psychologically care about status and others' opinions and (b) society RUNS on such things so having low status and being disrespected has negative social, economic and other consequences, especially for a male.

Huedogg2Huedogg29 months ago

You love me while fucking every Tom dick and harry

BlueEyd2BlueEyd29 months ago

Sometimes it's fun to read about how it went.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story.

Personally I would have used DRY ICE to disfigure the cheaters permanently.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

That’s a pretty good revenge on the BF.

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

Damn. That is one heck of a nonviolent burn. Complete destruction of their reputation with long term fallout and vindication for both the MC and Rita that there was nothing they could do about it, because Ross is a closet submissive sissy and Nelly is a dom-wannabe. Scorching.

Kernow2023Kernow20234 days ago

well done , great revenge

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