by dangerouslydead
You truly should write this book! You know the ones with the yellow covers! LOL
I always enjoy his snapshots of revenge and retribution and his efforts to find different ways to achieve his goal.
is always provocative and rarely beneficial. This tale rates a sequel. TK U MLJ LV NV
I think baseball stats would get me off faster.
change a few words and names, rub off the serial number and reprint it as new. Nice try but it will not fly.
Man. Are you some criminal or mentally unsound guy in disguise? God save your wife.Poor woman.She must be repenting the day she married you.
Fun revenge, i'm pretty sure u your character administered the truth serium drug that is likely unattainable by joe average instead of a sleeping agent.
He went to a lot of work to get rid of her. He would have been better off if he just tossed her ass out. The end result would have been the same.
The premise I liked, but some of those images that were a part of the plan? Too complicated, but nice to think how they would regret their past and to live with the present and future.
They really turned it around... Interesting enough sodium pentothal is used in executions in the USA and most of the worlds chemical companies have stopped manufacturing it. So anyone wanting to imitate will have problems and they better get the dosage right!
Is there more? There should be because it seems unfinished to me.
I liked the idea and can see my wife in this. Poor dear she has already had her share of head hanging. More would be good though ...
The Fallout will you write another Chapter and Describe the Fallout and do the Wronged Parties get together or just Say thanks and go on with their Lives?
There will be a second part. To end it like this would be a disservice to the characters, and your readers. "The Fallout" is an excellent title by the way.
Lack of editing, mixed up construction make it less than interesting.
I am very happy with the way this story ends. Is it written by somebody whose primary language is English? Since the author is from India, I very much doubt it. Does that detract from the story? No. The world does not revolve around the English language. Was the story complete? Yes. Life goes on. The only way that there is an end to this is for all participants to die and everybody else who saw the pictures and emails to die. Since that did not happen the story is complete as is. I vote no sequel.
Now for all of you out the in cyber space, who are such great authors, get busy and write your own sequels, if you can't or wont then please do us a favor and just disappear. Your comments are duly noted.
Life is life, a story is just that a story. A story posted on this or other internet site is just a story. A real person's imaginations, or creative ability, nothing more. GET A LIFE! You can be the man or woman you want to be in real life or you can show us how you wished that you really were as against how you really are. Think about it.
the only thing that could have made that story any better. would be after everything calms down and starts going back to normal for the two cheaters. release a couple more pics to everyone and start the shit up all over again..... hahahahaha
I love your work for many reasons. For starters it's too the point and does not go on and on for many pages. Furthermore Revenge extracted in your stories is kick-ass and that I believe is abn important ingreident for a loving wives category or a "cheating" story. I hate it when the husband becomes a wimp & forgives the wife. I have as much heart as the next guy on the planet but in a cheating case somehow expecting forgiveness is not justified.
saw a few spelling mistakes in my comment and that was bad. Moral of the story I need to check when i type super fast before submitting my comment. :(
but you need to rethink your endings. well written i like yo style.
Well well. Humiliate the cheating couple by portraying them not only as cheaters but as deviants as well. Thet just thought they were fucking but a very different image of their follies was being portrayed to everyone else.
HA
comes to fruition and the payback/revenge is complete, TK U MLJ LV NV
I just ran across this short story. You really need to write chapter 2
with Anonymous How did it go and Did Rita and Nelles hubby get together as the Grieving Divorcees . Or did they just go about finding a New Lover and stay Friends.
how did it go? it went however your mind wants it to go, but badly for the wife and cheating husband, enough said.
You may be the master of the revenge story. While the tactics may not always be 100% believable, they do inspire the imagination!
Is a good idea, you got some strange shit in your head, please keep sharing....5
Great idea RePhil
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The cheaters wanted something on the side? They got it. And everyone knows. And everyone LAUGHS AT THEM IN THEIR PERVERSION. Ha Ha.
This tale would make a good short comedy porno. Write the screenplay, I'm sure many will watch.
Ha again.
compared to the magnitude of public opinion. TK U MLJ LV NV
But it is not necessary - my mind can come up with numerous endings all fun for him not for them -
Even one where he keeps her but as a clear and obvious Sub to him so he "looks" like the big bad he man LOL. I might lead to a good long term relationship but the trust would never likely return so why bother -
Definitely the product of a deliciously evil and twisted mind!!! 5*
I laughed all the way through. ROFL
5 HUGE Stars!
could have used proofreading/editing. DD wrote one story in '13 and none so far in '14. I hope she returns to Lit.
Like all good stories, I wanted it to keep going and not end. The cheaters got theirs in a very original way. It didn't need to be any longer, but I wish it was. Thanks for a very original story.
I guess if you catch your spouse cheating it's ok to make an absolute fool, laughing stock out of them for all time.
Don't cheat. Only stupid people cheat. Ask Ashley Madison
OH YEAH
The truth of why people cheat is often worse than making up a story about them. Pure selfishness, the desire of a little person to feel power by getting over on another person - their spouse, fucking as networking (whoring), pathetically low self esteem - all of these "reasons" are more embarrassing than a little sexual perversion. The truth is also THE TRUTH! Everybody deserves it, no one deserves a lie. We only go around once, there is no time for lies.
Not being willing to experiment does NOT make him look like a man, or the other guy look like a sissy. A few decades ago, a number of men where I worked thought performing oral on a woman was something 'real' men didn't do. They lost out on a lot of fine women, and not only were they not considered real men, they were thought of as prudish and backwards wimps.
A surprising number of the crowd will feel the same way about this husband . . . narrow-minded, missionary sex for babies only prude . . . what she did was wrong, and many will snicker, but many will also think they know why she looked elsewhere.
the outside world will give up after 15 minutes of fame. TK U MLJ LV NV
I like the premis. I think there is a story there that can be fleshed out. Your other stories flow better. They are not as choppy and have fewer grammatical errors. Please keep writing, but this one seems like you called it in.
Flesh it out more.
He take her back? More revenge?
this is a good story, please continue.
I agree with previous Annoy comment! Stupid and childish!
Oh.....and where the hell did he get Sodium Pentathol????
This story is familiar. I think I liked the one she had to wear the ankle chain and other things to let the world know what a whore she is. And I liked the one where Rick/Richard reclaims his wife with blackmail emails and turns her into a pain slut sub. He goes from disdain to dom in her eyes. That's probably the most erotic story in Loving Wives.
I like your stories...they are really good and I love allot of your ideas, but, they need to continue on and include the aftermath...also a little more background...Mostly though I would love to find out what happened afterwords.
His great plan is to knock out his wife’s lover, then play with her lover’s dick, and then take photos of her lover’s dick.
Nothing gay about that! Hahaha. I guess the author is trying to tell us something.
Great story I go into other btb's but it definitely works
I like the way you did that. Humiliation works as well as violence, with less jail time.
Masterfully written and cleverly deceptive! Most original way of a cockhold protecting himself from people thinking that he was not man enough to keep his wife happy!
The usual blow 'em up, shoot 'em up, knock 'em down, bury 'em alive only provides a few moments of resolution, way too quick punishments.
Humiliation, that's the gift that keeps on giving :)
Great story!!
Oh Yeah
Read this before. That's how you humiliate cheaters. The hell with them.
AWESOME revenge. Super idea of the strapon and shrunken penis email wording, LOL. Also, all the words that Websters Dictionary wouldn't print
I find myself mystified by the recurring theme in LW that everybody laughs at a man whose wife has cheated on him and they all assume that the reason she has done so is because he isn't getting the job done in the bedroom. While I have no doubt that such people do exist, I can't imagine why anyone would give a flying fuck about their worthless opinions. If I had been cuckolded these idiots would be the least of my worries.
they layeth the smack down on their candy asses.......if you smell what dangerouslydead is cooking
Nicely done. Writer constructed a humiliation plan that beats any form of corporal punishment. Also liked the ending. Most viewers van picture what the husband’s life is next. The fact that the victims could enact this action demonstrated that they will be supported and fine.
@anon - OK, it's a legit query. Explanation is very simple, people LOVE to laugh at other people's misfortune and put other people down. Most people are assholes, at least in part. THIS is why when someone is cheated on, instead of defending the victim, they snipe at the victim. It's standard human behavior, unfortunately. It's FAR FAR worse when the cheating victim is male - in Western society, because man-hating culture won't even give him the benefit of being seen as a victim like they would a woman; in more traditional patriarchal ones, because of various cultural norms too complicated to explain in a small comment.
If you're asking why someone would care about others' opinions... again, see human sociology and psychology. We evolved to (a) psychologically care about status and others' opinions and (b) society RUNS on such things so having low status and being disrespected has negative social, economic and other consequences, especially for a male.
Great story.
Personally I would have used DRY ICE to disfigure the cheaters permanently.
Damn. That is one heck of a nonviolent burn. Complete destruction of their reputation with long term fallout and vindication for both the MC and Rita that there was nothing they could do about it, because Ross is a closet submissive sissy and Nelly is a dom-wannabe. Scorching.