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Puppy Love Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by LoneStarRider09/22/11

better and better!

Three chapters in, and the story just keeps improving!!!!

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by naughtycouture09/23/11

OMG....

Ok... I've been some-what-patiently waiting for this, lol. And, girl, you did NOT disappoint. That was H-O-T. After that great scene in the bathroom... we knew that when they finally got together it would be explosive.

The pumpkin-picking adventure and Emma seeing him play with her niece... just makes me love David even more. He's the guy every woman deserves. Yes please! And, he's definitely the man that Emma needs. The fact that she's starting to feel the "bubblings" of love is perfect. That part was so real-life and exactly how I would've felt if I were in her shoes. It's a feeling that wells up. Thank you for not having her blurt it out, and for making it so believable and real-life. It's so hard to explain what I mean... but I think you get what I'm saying! I just loved the 2 situations that had her feeling like she was starting to fall in love with him. And, I can already tell, he totally loves her.

Please, please, please don't make us wait too long for chapter 4. I'm utterly in love with these characters and can't wait to see what happens next :-)

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by Anonymous09/25/11

Awesome

This story is awesome and I just hope you write more for it soon!!!
Really good job well done :D

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by dbroseley12/31/11

This story is great. Can't wait to read the next ch.

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by aussie_10102/02/12

Loving it!

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by Vennic04/02/12

Loved it

"Help me get away from myself, I wanna fuck you like an animal..." That ringtone made my day, lmao! I've had the song for years, but I never paid much attention to the lyrics. I definitely am now! Excellent song, great story.

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