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345 Clementine Street

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by rdoolittle09/19/11

Unusually short for you

Did you decide on "Erotic Horror" as the category? I guess I'll find out why next chapter...Rick

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by Anonymous11/16/12

Amazing

No luckier man could have stumbled upon such an intriguing predicament . Landlady final statement seals his fate into her web.

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by Sputnik5711/17/12

'Unusually short'

This was a story i wrote for a competition whereby, the story had to be written in a short period- I love the idea of darkly mysterious women who lead double lives. I may return to this one at some point!

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by Anonymous11/19/12

more please

wish there was more ...........

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by caesarionr6909/14/13

continue plz

this start is so very erotic and mysterious
cant wait till you continue with it

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by JoannePare10/15/14

Wonderful

Dear Sputnik57
Wonderful story and the Erotic Horror leaves so much to write about.

Love the way she gets him to confess his love for mature Dominant Women.

Hope you will come back to it soon and give us more insight of his submission under such a Lady.

Joanne Pare.

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by Sputnik5710/16/14

Thank you Joanne...

...this was originally written as a one off short, but so many people have asked for continuation; I might just revisit!

Thanks for the encouragement !

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