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Forbidden Feelings Ch. 05-06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/18/11

so good

this story is amazing. please keep it going. i would really love for these 2 to end up being together for good.

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by CassieK09/19/11

This is so "Real life".

Thank u for your story, it is so wonderfully written.
I hope u keep the story line going, I find it so "sexy" and "exciting" (Definately 5 stars)

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by Anonymous09/20/11

Amazing story love to know what happens next

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by Anonymous09/24/11

A Very Little Detail (Forbidden Feelings Ch 05 & 06)

FIRST:
We were at a red light, so I placed my hand on top of hers. I wanted to continue to hold her hand but the light changed and I needed to shift gears.

THEN:
Leah, I would never let anything happen to you. Please understand that." I put the car in park and looked into her eyes,

Did this car have a manual transmission with a clutch? If it was a manual transmission, then how could she put the car in park?

Just a little detail. Anyway, I am loving this story.

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