All Comments on 'Forbidden Feelings Ch. 05-06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
so good

this story is amazing. please keep it going. i would really love for these 2 to end up being together for good.

CassieKCassieKover 12 years ago
This is so "Real life".

Thank u for your story, it is so wonderfully written.

I hope u keep the story line going, I find it so "sexy" and "exciting" (Definately 5 stars)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Amazing story love to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A Very Little Detail (Forbidden Feelings Ch 05 & 06)

FIRST:

We were at a red light, so I placed my hand on top of hers. I wanted to continue to hold her hand but the light changed and I needed to shift gears.

THEN:

Leah, I would never let anything happen to you. Please understand that." I put the car in park and looked into her eyes,

Did this car have a manual transmission with a clutch? If it was a manual transmission, then how could she put the car in park?

Just a little detail. Anyway, I am loving this story.

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