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Belmont Park Hotel

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by Anonymous

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by live4passion09/15/11

evocative

juxtaposition of sound texture color.. quite successfully done. Welcome back, long time no see.

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by kokshur09/17/11

five stars

i liked it. gave it five stars. i did find the final quote inconsistent with the rest of the plotline. hey, check out my tanka style poem "exhibition"

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by tazz31707/29/12

IS THE CROP

passive or active, TK U MLJ LV NV

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