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You Can't Throw Everything Away Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/07/16

Believe it or not

that useless cunt, Oprah, fucked my marriage up too.

I'd come home at the end of the day, my ex would go up one side of me and down the other about this thing I did wrong, or that thing, or everything.

I hope Oprah burns in fucking hell. I really do.

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by Anonymous02/17/17

Goes to show you, "Don't believe the shit you hear on the television".

Crap is what you hear!

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by Anonymous02/18/17

You had interesting characters

They just never did anything interesting. The writing was good, but I just kept waiting for something to happen and it never did. Four stars for the writing and the characters.

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by 1wrngrght02/19/17

Mopar to Chevy

Really...despite the gripping tale you've shared all I can think about is going from Mopar to Chevy. 1970 muscle car madness to sedate, safe 21st century tedium on wheels. Mopar to Chevy, and a box of model trains too. Our guy is in his mid 30's right? Yet he reads more like a old man in his 60's, maybe his 70's...maybe.

I gonna take a wild flyer here. You had about half a dozen maybe ten partially written, maybe even barely started stories and ideas scattered around the old hard drive. And you had a near psychotic rage against Oprah and The View (not that such a feeling is unusual.) strangely you did like the idea of baking, sleuthing about, and that odd fetish regarding the monthly centerfold in Model Railroader magazine...yeah baby, move your caboose onto my siding. Anyway, for some completely whacked reason the names Croteau, Delacroix, and Hiquet held deep and powerful meaning for you. And then there's the oatmeal raisin cookie crumbs on the floor - disturbing - well I could go on. But really - why?

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