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Birthday Gifts Fit for a Prince Ch. 08

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by KillerRomance09/19/11

Fuck yeah!

I've been waiting for this for so long! So glad you're updating :) Awesome writing, awesome characters. Can't wait to know how it goes from here! KR xx

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by Anonymous09/20/11

Please!

Don't let us wait so long for the next chapter!!!

Love, love, love this story (and bought and paid for).

L

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by Anonymous09/20/11

Omg i want to cry...please write more soon!!! I've waited so long....good to see ur writing skills are still good. Lookin forward to more of ur works :-)

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by Anonymous09/20/11

Just read the note in your bio... Glad to read that things are going well for you. Love the story and hope to read about what happens next soon!

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by Anonymous09/22/11

So glad you updated....

I hope the next chapter comes soon.

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by Anonymous09/22/11

I actually shed tears, but gosh...

I really love this story. I really feel like I know these characters. I totally understand where Jade is coming from and although I do feel that Akim does deserve some punishment for his treatment of Jade, I also feel his pain and longing. So sad; so very sweet.

This update was satisfying and well worth the wait. After reading you bio, I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying your life. Everyone deserves happiness.

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by Anonymous09/22/11

sorry for badgering you.

Was worth it. I loved how Jade would only accept his love and express her own if she was free. I hope there is more, even though sad endings are more real

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by Anonymous09/22/11

,,,good writing ...

... massage is a great setting for hot stories .. how about writing some loving wives stories ?? thanks

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by Anonymous09/22/11

Simply Beautiful.

Your profile is the one I view the most, praying that you would update this story and fulfill my craving of viewing your amazing stories. I beg of you dont make us wait too long for the next chapter, you have all of us spellbound with your gift :)

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by Anonymous09/23/11

fuuuuuuckkkkkk

that was a sexy ass chapter. but god damn if jade doesn't whip her brain into shape imma steal akim from her! you stupid bitch say you love him! pussy pussy pussy

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by cbakasa709/25/11

Finally!!!!!

Finally a new chapter!!! Why is it so short though?!?!?! PleAse write more and soon! I'm glad your life is going so well.

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by saori10/05/11

Short but sweet!

I am so pleased that you have given us another chapter, and a great one at that. I am glad to hear things are good for you, life is better when it is full of fun and happiness, right?! Looking forward to another chapter....

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by niteshade10/08/11

Please hurry with the next chapter!!!!

I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

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by Anonymous10/28/11

omg

This is amazing ! You do not knw how I got so happy when I saw u posted another cjapter, I actually squeal with delight! What a wonderful chapter!!! Please continue this story because this chapter made my night! YOUR MY FAVORITE AUTHOR!!!!

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by Anonymous11/05/11

hmm...

I would love to see them do anal... just saying. When he threatened her with it a few chapters back I thought it was so sexy.

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by Anonymous11/07/11

Thank you!!!!!

Oh my goodness thank you so much for adding another chapter. As the plot thickens so does my live for all of your work!!!!!! Please keep writing!!!

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by trippychick11/07/11

cant wait

I cant wait to see what happens next. hope to hear from you soon :)

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by Anonymous11/08/11

ive been following this story from the begining and get sooo excited whenever i see an update! great chapter cant wait for the next one!

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by Anonymous11/08/11

OH.MY.GOD

Can I just say that I've only just found your story, and I've spent all day reading it. The sex is perfect, and the romance makes my heart ache. When I saw that you'd stopped there, I actually let out a little squeak. This is absoloutely perfect, and my favourite story out there. PLEASE update soon!

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by Anonymous11/10/11

awsome!!!!!!!

mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeee please more lol you write so awsome love this story

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by Foronce11/17/11

good one

He acctually becomes human, I like it : )

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by Anonymous11/20/11

Beautifull
Can't wait for more!!!!!
Perhaps about him sending her back home but after a while she returns to him willingly

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by Anonymous12/02/11

LOVEEEEEEEEEED it

I just found this story and I couldn't stop reading untill I haad read it al!!! A very nice blend of story and sex indeed!! I love how you're very discriptive an your sex scenes, the story is a good and hot suporter making it all even more interesting. MORE PLEASE!

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by 4ever_Dreaming12/04/11

Moooooore

Moooooooooreeeeeee please!!

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by Anonymous12/08/11

I'm so sad! Make Jade love him please!

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by Anonymous12/10/11

MOREEE

i've been one here every day sice i read the story, waiting for the sequal. More pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee

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by Maxillina12/15/11

Please make another chapter

Oh no I have to find out if she will ever love him back! Please post another chapter I really feel for Akim's desperate need to be loved by Jade.

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by Anonymous12/18/11

What the fuck..

You're such a good writer..I wish you could end a story better though..

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by alpha_lover01/03/12

ending

I've enjoyed all of this story so far and although for the way the prince mistreats Jade makes me think he doesn't deserve her, I'm hoping for a happy ending. Maybe let Jade punish him a little then take him back. Please write a happy ending!

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by Anonymous02/13/12

Good

I like all of your stories however a true writer always finishes there work. Show us ur a real writer and reach your full potential.

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by Anonymous03/14/12

More!

Another chapter please! I'm hooked!

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by Epixryson03/15/12

Very very good writing *****

I realy love the way you make Akim degrade Jade every time to the point he angers me, just to see Jade taking the upper hand at the end .Combined with your sex scenes ,it's agonizing and amazing .I also love the dialogues and espesialy Jades remarks.
I'm pretty sure this is'nt the last chapter but its 2012 ,so I guess you'll be updating any day now,or month.It doesn't matter as long as you do.
Thank you for one of the best stories here , and anywhere.

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by Katana9205/31/12

OMG

Please don't stop this its such a wonderful storry. Akim and Jade are perfect Please more!

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by Anonymous06/11/12

soooo goood!

w-o-w you are an amazing writer!
lets go for chapter 9 shall we?

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by Anonymous07/17/12

Amazing

I absolutely love this story. I've read countless slave and master romances that have irked me because of how the slave somehow becomes content with her conditions. Forgets all his/her master's wrongdoings in the name of "love" and simple sexual attraction is mistaken for love. Jade falls for akim while stilll keeping her wishes for freedom, while not forgetting what he put her through yet still feeling something for this man. I believe that these two may be in love.

You're an amazing writer. Few people can pull this type of story off ^-^.

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by joodle01/13/13

Beautiful

I swear I am so close to crying. This was probably the most powerful chapter I have read. I have read some pretty sweet stuff, but in this chapter you truly grab the reader by the gut. I think we all know that feeling of vulnerability and fear that we are not loved back, and some know the pain of being rejected. You truly seem to brand into your readers the sensations of both characters. At least this reader. I think you have grown as a writer, and more so than most will in their career. I hope you will see this story through to the happy end. You have to!!!

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by Anonymous08/16/13

This is absolutely beautiful in the purity of Akim's love for her. I first i expected it to be similar to "the Taking of Lena ch. 08" , its the same situation of returned hidden love. Yet Akim's response is so selfish and shows a true depth to his chapter. Just awesome!

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by Anonymous06/08/14

YES!!!

I shouldn't even be writing a comment because anon below totally aced it!!!
Great story

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by Absinth304/13/16

That broke my heart

💔

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