All Comments on 'Rebecca and Alan and the Summer Ch. 03'

Write a full chapter. Good but way too short and fast-moving.

The store needs more story, what you have is good but give more detail to give each character a personality instead of just a person having sex.

It's time to sit down and write this story and make it a complete chapter. So far not liking it at all.

i really like this so far, ive been checking everyday for the 4th, when is it coming?

Please add a 4th to this. It's just great. It's one of the best stories I've read on this site and I've been on it for many years.

Where is the follow up ? Don't leave us hanging...

Beck, your going to have a great summer - still think of Alan?