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Not my cup of tea
To each his own.
I do like Loving Wife stories though.
You've got 50 comments before this one, so you did do something right.
Marci should have gone swimming
with Derek, I mean, after all, he was the Bull and she deferred to him, he had a bigger dick than she did, all the way through the story. So, she should have been keeping him company. All's well that ends well.
Husband to blame?
On the other hand I had allowed us to get into this situation in the first place.
It wasn't a bad story until you pulled that.
Fucking coward
He is a coward wimp
Waited too long
The husband was stupid for first of all getting into that lifestyle while married. If you really want to be in the lifestyle then the very last thing you want to be is married. Since he was married his next mistake was to wait too long to act. Finally his third mistake is being too damn good to the slut afterwards.
"How do you argue with shit like that?"...simple!...
..."get your stuff and go to your bull!" A guy using tricks to get into something and then sneaks around is no bull - he is bullshit! On the otherr hand: It takes a man with priciples to do that
5 I had to laugh
dear annony, the asshole of LIT IS A CUCK!!! It must be true what Bonnie taylor2 saids about this fool!! He hates everything and his wife is a whore and he is as cuck! Go suck a cock dear annony!
hehehehehehehehe What a fool you are asshole of LIT!
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5-4 = 1Star
5 Stars for the revenge.
-4 stars for a wife swapping, willing cuckold keeping a cum dump slut around at all.
Crap story, badly written, with numerous errors.
Author sucks worse than his protagonist.
1*
Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka ANON!
I was all set to skip to the end after thinking the guy was a class a pussy for doing nothing.
Then it all changed with the revenge, and with the meeting of the asshole, the cunt and him. Think he could have rubbed it in a lot more about being the bull now, maybe should have made the asshole eat his cum out from the cunt's ass after he fucked her.
Only thing I wish was changed was him needing to pay Susan. Speaking of Susan, I just remembered wasn't he able to fuck Susan because her husband liked to watch? How was he able to get Susan home for a 3way then?
Anyway, Well done
stone cold
Would have kicked her and Deric to the curb at the first sign of trouble when Deric showed up alone and they thought they were going to get it on . Not part of the deal.
Besides sharing, or swapping , is some thing you might do with REAL friends that there is a true fondness for each other. Relationships with strangers rarely work.
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