All Comments on 'The Hot List Ch. 02'

Enough said.

This series, so far ,should gave been one submission. The author is good but quite likely to be kinda guy to walk into Krispy Kreme and order half a doughnut. Get over yourself- these flash stories of yours aren't so full of wit & wisdom-they require two sittings to fully absorb.

OK. Nothing much here if this is the end.

I wonder what you're expecting to be included in a third chapter? The fogies as judges in a beauty contest?

I was content with one chapter. This second one was, as expected, the feed-up and pay-off.

Ok, then, line up the gold bikinis with numbers on the back.

Cheers,

Kilroy.

If you're a perfect 10, do you win? This is nothing more than what guys do every freaking day. So, maybe next you can write about the pros and cons of herbicide or vinegar and liquid soap as a weed killer.

Very nice short story -- short and sweet. No verbiage; no excess description. Congratulations.

if you cant do IT, at least think on IT. TK U MLJ LV NV

Well written and realistic, but it leaves me a bit worried about what it is leading up to!

But still waiting for the story!!!

Could trouble be on the way?

can be a very altering factor when there is to much of it. Satara

And yes it is still interesting -

Fun idea too - as long as it stays hidden and anon -

Still too short!

OK so?

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

That's it.

She puts up with YOU???

She's already a 17.

By I'm completely lost already.

Cute. LP

And the story builds

Hot list age groups imply women over 60 aren't worth rating. Bullshit. Google sexy women over 60 and you'll be shocked.

still reading...........................

??? ???

BJ

I can't see this going well

I didn't understand why it took the old people two weeks to provide the results of their assessment? Or will it turn out that all these fourteen days they fucked her together and alternately for deeper testing and reliability of conclusions?

Sounds good so far, but there has to be more, right?